Photographic Memories CH 6

May 29, 2009 18:30

After a magnificent case of writers block I've finally managed to finish this chapter and am pleased with it, it is surprisingly to date, my longest chapter. I hope you enjoy it and I apologize for the extended updating time!

Title: Photographic Memories
Pairings: Yoochun/Changmin
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slight Angst
Genre: Drama, Romance
A/N: ( Read more... )

k-pop: fan fiction, yoomin

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pawshingo May 30 2009, 14:22:10 UTC
What's Yoochun playing at? He's flirting like nobody's business and yet when Changmin's offers an opening, he says you're a good friend and later proceeds to kiss him! Yoochun's dialogues paints him as a really cool, suave guy! That part about the cracks being slowly being sealed was excellent, brilliant. This is good,complex but I'm waiting patiently for 6!

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:28:34 UTC
Yoochun's dialogues paints him as a really cool, suave guy!
Thank you! I'm trying really hard to make him so and I'm glad my efforts are being seen ♥ I really do think Yoochun has the potential to be exactly this way in real life lol.

Thank you for your patience, I'm really going to try and update sooner :-D Thank you for sticking around and still reading! ♥

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pawshingo May 31 2009, 14:11:42 UTC
I'm sticking around! You've me addicted to Yoochun's one liners and parting shots!

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:30:10 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so please you're still enjoying it!! &hearts

Hopefully I am able to stop the pain Yoochun continues to spread and make everyone happy and sparkly :-D

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kurogoma May 30 2009, 15:57:28 UTC
one of those updates i am really looking forward to.

both changmin and yoochun seem to be dancing around each other. changmin seems to be more willing to put his heart on the line (again) just to see how possible it can be with yoochun. both have walls, yet changmin seems to be the fearless one. i think i mentioned in an earlier chapter that he is strong emotionally because of how he continues to keep mementoes of past hurts to remind himself of.....himself. yoochun despite all his daring flirtations, is the one more concerned with protecting his own heart then trying to let changmin in, even a little.

yoochun's mixed signals confuse me too, and for changmin which goes without saying. he is possessive and jealous and acts like changmin is his. but changmin is right, he isn't. not when yoochun is shutting him out, not willing to try a relationship (at the point) and pushing him away when things get too much.

rambling long comment. but i can't wait to read more. :) &hearts

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:42:02 UTC
one of those updates i am really looking forward to.
Yay! I'm really excited to hear that! ♥

You did mention that in a previous chapter and you're completely right!

yoochun despite all his daring flirtations, is the one more concerned with protecting his own heart then trying to let changmin in
I really couldn't have put it better myself. That is exactly how I wanted to portray Yoochun, it's not that he's some cold unfeeling flirt, but that perhaps there's a reason why he doesn't open up and maybe there's something in his past that has made him this way... ok. I think I've said too much I'm gonna stop now LOL

I love rambling comments so you ramble away whenever you need to :-D

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enchantyd86 May 30 2009, 16:44:41 UTC
This story breaks my heart!

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:21:18 UTC
Awww ♥ ♥ I'm totally gonna try and stop and make your heart feel better :-D

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wasurenaide_3 May 30 2009, 16:59:28 UTC
WAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I echo what nivani said...will you ever stop breaking my heart??
Okay, so this was an excellent chapter...but GAH! Yoochun makes me so frustrated! And I love the note Min leaves him, "You drool in your sleep". LOL! That made me laugh so hard. =D

Anyways, I love you, and I love this story...so PLEASE keep writing!! I desperately want to know what happens!!

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:45:55 UTC
I am going to really try not to break your heart anymore!! It's the angst... it just takes over sometimes and there's no way to stop it lol.

And I love the note Min leaves him
Yay! I'm glad, I really liked that too and I thought it was so Changmin to write something like that :-D

You are the sweetest!! I love you for reading and I will definitely keep writing!

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ephemeral_blue May 31 2009, 10:46:59 UTC
by the way... I ADORE your icon. ♥

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