Another wonderful chapter. So glad Jensen went to Jeff's bed even if a panic attack was the result - though somehow I can't convince myself how much the panic attack resulted from Jeff's presence. But the fact that the morning after Jensen is still turning to Jeff rather than Jared is promising.
Now I've promised myself I will only one chapter at a time interspersed with jobs that need to be done, so now I'm off to do boring stuff then I'll be back for more.
I have a little continuity error nitpick, and I want to make sure I'm not missing something. In the scene where Jensen goes to Jeff's guest room and blows him, how many shirts is Jensen wearing? Because it sounds like Jensen takes off his OWN shirt to clean up Jeff, and then the part from Jeff's POV makes it clear the lights are on, yet later in the story there's a sceen that's supposed to be the first time Jensen let's Jeff see him without clothes so... so I'm a little confused. Was the lighting just dim? Was Jensen wearing more than one shirt? Was "his own" actually referring to Jeff?? *scratches head*
Apologies for my overthinking this way too frakking much.
How about we chalk that up to Jensen being more nervous later when he was on display? He probably figured Jeff couldn't see much under the covers and was probably too blissed out from the blowjob to notice. Afterward he knew Jeff's attention was all on him...:)
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Now I've promised myself I will only one chapter at a time interspersed with jobs that need to be done, so now I'm off to do boring stuff then I'll be back for more.
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I think Jensen's attack was triggered more from the sexual contact than Jeff himself. But yes, Jensen does turn to Jeff:) He's stubborn that way! :)
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Apologies for my overthinking this way too frakking much.
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