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eowyn_315

Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With (16/17)

Dec 09, 2007 21:43

Title: Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With
Pairing: Spike/Dru (sorta), Spike/Buffy
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: torture, rape, and other unpleasant things... but it's just the first few chapters
Summary: The third part of my alternate season six. Spike is taken prisoner by a vampire gang, and held captive by someone he never expected to see again. ( Read more... )

fic: other things

Comments 10

ayinhara December 10 2007, 03:40:50 UTC

Buffy is trying really hard to mend fences with Spike and Dawn. Well done!

eowyn_315 December 10 2007, 14:28:52 UTC

Yes, she is. :) Thanks!

basilio_the_cat December 10 2007, 06:46:35 UTC

Well done :)

eowyn_315 December 10 2007, 14:29:07 UTC

Thank you!

louise39 December 10 2007, 15:17:17 UTC

...she shook her head, physically resisting the hallucinations. Spike had saved her, loved her, had been devastated when she pushed him away.

Mending fences with Spike. [Thanksgiving dinner WOW]
Mending fences with Dawn. [A new knife and training with Spike]

Wonderful to watch Buffy recovering.

eowyn_315 December 10 2007, 19:57:49 UTC

Once she's out of the immediate terror of the hallucinations, I think she can see that it's not Spike's fault. It may take time for her to be totally comfortable with him, but it's a start. :) Thanks for the comments!

devonkmiller December 10 2007, 16:24:35 UTC

Still reading and enjoying very much. I hope you keep writing!
Thanks for posting.

eowyn_315 December 10 2007, 19:58:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! There's another fic after this one, which is currently in progress. :)

brunettepet January 9 2008, 16:44:41 UTC

I liked the mirroring of Spike and Buffy deep in thought, staring blankly at their turned off televisions. You did an excellent job bringing them back to a good space believably, and I enjoyed Spike's internal struggle not to physically offer comfort.

Buffy's thoughtful, heart felt gift to Dawn was the antithesis of Hank's, and their bonding was very touching. This made me smile: “I inherited the internal lie detector from Mom. Also, Willow called here ten minutes ago to say she’d be over with Chinese. Next time, make sure your alibi knows she’s an alibi.” Busted!

eowyn_315 January 9 2008, 20:59:46 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a little questionable how easily they could patch things up, but I think they're getting to a better place. And Buffy's getting better at this "mom" thing, isn't she?