A pathetic piece of "journalism." Basically, it's a piece about preparations for the Lord of the Rings musical that's coming out next March. (Do musical productions really take this long to prepare? They've been working on this thing for, like, three years now.) Normally, I'd be excited - heck, I already am, although it's premiering in Toronto and
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Eeek! ^^; This is what I'm always worried about with my stuff--that there's just not enough writing in there.
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Of course, there are some pieces that should have a higher percentage of quotes. But regardless of what the piece covers, the ratio of paraphrases to quotes should always be, at most, three to two. And even that's exceptionally high.
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Visit the boycott site www.torontoslumtourism.com
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2. That website has nothing to do with the musical:Our campaign is not targeted at the stage production of Lord of the Rings, which we fully support. Rather, it is meant to highlight the staggering hypocrisy of both the City and the province, which both pat themselves on the back for the time, money and resources they put into landing this production while they continue to ignore the concerns of tenants, who are languishing in squalor.
- Lord of the Slums homepage
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