i'll take anything you give me because i know that god forgives me

Apr 27, 2011 12:11

Title: I need a witness to see the mess I've made
Author: eonism
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine. I'm just here for the lulz.
Characters/Pairings: Dean/Castiel, mentions of Dean/Lisa and Balthazar/Castiel (Supernatural)
Word Count: 3,096
Spoilers/Continuity: Set after 6x17
Summary: Dean comes and Castiel goes, and they don’t talk about it. It’s just ( Read more... )

supernatural, dean/cas, fanfiction

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prongsy April 27 2011, 17:50:13 UTC
Fantastic! Spot on characterization, it just hits the right note for Season 6 thus far. I wish for Cas (and Dean's sake) he could stay, because they both want it so much. I love Dean's want for Castiel to be there, to answer the call, to not picking up the waitress, and trying to bury the feelings when he thinks Cas won't show. It's subtle and SO DEAN because it isn't mushy and isn't fully detailed. You have to read between the lines, like always with Dean, so it works perfectly.

LOVE IT! <3

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eonism May 2 2011, 21:47:10 UTC
Thanks much, glad you enjoyed it, :)

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angelshandprint May 6 2011, 12:42:50 UTC
My, that was pretty much all I wanted to say. Just wanna add I love how you can see Dean can't stop thinking of Cas and Balthazar's words.
*mems*

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darkmachines April 27 2011, 23:35:56 UTC
♥ you're a queen.

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eonism May 2 2011, 21:49:00 UTC
It's better than being a drag.

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mrasaki April 28 2011, 05:55:40 UTC
Mm, this story just sums up everything I love about Dean/Cas. All that underlying tension and want and anger, but also caring.

And? Then Cas opens his eyes, wet and black in this light, and he’s a wreck of bruised lips and red cheeks. That is a powerful image. Lawd.

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eonism May 2 2011, 22:04:35 UTC
Thanks so much, ♥ I'm pretty fond of that part, too. Then again I kind of perv all over Misha Collins, so. There is that...

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mulder200 April 28 2011, 07:21:56 UTC
This fits S6 Dean and Cas to a T!

The way they talk but don't really say what they mean or want and the distance between them is greater than before.

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eonism May 2 2011, 22:05:08 UTC
Thanks much, glad you enjoyed it, :3

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eonism May 2 2011, 22:05:27 UTC
Thanks so much, ♥

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