Comments | entwashian: Ficlets x 2

entwashian

Ficlets x 2

Sep 12, 2010 20:03

Title: Signals
Fandom(s): Leverage
Pairing: Parker/Eliot
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 700
Written for: inanna1130, as part of her whedonland Heart of Gold gift.
A/N: Set in season 1.

( evasive maneuvers are supposed to be her thing )

fic, chuck, leverage

Comments 5

onebrightmoment September 13 2010, 03:40:55 UTC

DELETED SCENES AND BONUS FEATURES INDEED.

THIS ARE BOTH SO INCREDIBLY PERFECT I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN. SO COMPLETELY IN CHARACTER!

I LOVE SNEAKY!PARKER AND HOW ELIOT FIGHTS FOR LIKE A SECOND BUT THEN GIVES IN.
It’s not a pleasant, polite, tinkling sound; it’s strident and too bright, like a beacon.
HOLY CRAP YOU'VE ACTUALLY BOTTLED THE SOUND OF PARKER'S LAUGHTER AND REPRODUCED IN THE WRITTEN LANGUAGE.

I LOVE HOW CHUCK'S THOUGHTS JUST BOUNCE AROUND AND YET MAKE TOTAL SENSE. I CAN FEEL A BIT OF URGENCY IN IT THAT I ADORE.
she still smells delicious and kind of sweet, like corn dogs.
OH CHUCK. OH CHUCK.

AND HAVE YOU NOTICED YOU HAVE RENDERED ME COMPLETELY INCAPABLE OF TURNING OFF THE CAPSLOCK???

entwashian September 13 2010, 04:57:11 UTC

Heeeee, I love that you picked out that line about Parker's laughter -- it's what inspired the title.

SERIOUSLY. What would YOU be thinking about if you were locked in a tiny space with Sarah & Casey?

Lol, that's what the shift key's for, isn't it? To make the little letters? ;)

mizzmarvel September 13 2010, 04:02:22 UTC

Oh Chuckles! No one blames you for viewing the deleted scenes and bonus features.

entwashian September 13 2010, 04:35:55 UTC

I mean, he would have to turn in his geek card if he didn't, right?

pintsizeninja September 13 2010, 16:27:57 UTC

OMG YOU WROTE LEVERAGE, YAY. <3 I love it so much. It's so very Parker and Eliot.

Even Parker has to see how messed up that is… right? Hahaha, oh Eliot. This is Parker we're talking about, here. I love the idea of Parker beating up Eliot just to get his attention. It's perfect Season 1 Parker.

I didn't read the Chuck one because I don't watch Chuck, but I'm sure it's just as awesome.