[fanfic] Starfighter: High-rise (CainxAbel)

Mar 24, 2009 18:43

Oh boy, I've been writing like a machine lately. ;_; All porn but uh. Yeah, don't judge me LOL. Stay tuned for more!

Title: High-rise
Rating: **NC-17**
Pairing: Cain/Abel
Word Count: 1,869
Warnings: Language, public sex, submission?
Summary: Simple math: Cain + Abel + an empty elevator = sex.

A/N: A shameless cameo (and mention) by two beloved original ( Read more... )

starfighter, fanfic, writing

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Comments 17

paintedguro March 25 2009, 04:54:53 UTC
Guh.

Just... guh.

It's been a while since I've read, well, anything really >.> Mostly because of the lack of creative storytelling and interesting plot. So I am absolutely thrilled that your story was the first one in a while! I love the tone of this, and the way you've taken on Cain and Abel is wonderful. Of couse, the sex wasn't bad either ;] But it takes alot to write sex well hehehe.

Hope to see more from you! <3

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ensnarement March 25 2009, 05:07:02 UTC
; A ; That means so much! It's so strange how this story was intended to be plot-less sex per Hamletmachine's request (ahaha) and turned out to be what I think is a little more than that. I can't seem to be able to just write pure porn :\ I guess that's a good thing, though, right? I have a real love for interesting character development, even in tiny little ficlets.

I really appreciate your input and wonderful comment. It makes writing something like this completely worth my time.

Ah, and I should be posting more within the next few days. Little drabbles, probably. I can't seem to get enough of these boys. There's so much promise!

Thanks again! You're wonderful :]

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paintedguro March 25 2009, 07:32:06 UTC
You are so welcome, but it was entirely deserved ;]

Hehehe Machineeeeee, that little perv. Well, you indeed brought the plotless porn to life. And I'm so glad you're aware of character development :D

Ugh, Cain and Abel..... There really is no getting enough. I think Machine needs a metal or something >.>

Can't wait for more from you!!! *excited*

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moral_extremist March 25 2009, 05:25:59 UTC
+____+ <3

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ensnarement March 25 2009, 06:09:20 UTC
OHOHO. Someone likes the naughty fics, I see C:

/cling

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moral_extremist March 25 2009, 14:28:04 UTC
I'm as sick and twisted as they get : D

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ensnarement March 25 2009, 15:05:19 UTC
kufufufu. I know C:

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hrivend March 25 2009, 23:38:44 UTC
poor abel :c, cain is so selfish

like a lot your avatar :D

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ensnarement March 25 2009, 23:44:38 UTC
D'aww. Abel likes it. I'm sure Cain will pounce on him when he gets to their dorm and give him kisses and be all clingy. YOU'LL SEE. ;___; I tried to include a bit of humanity in Cain's actions (like ruffling Abel's hair when he was done as a... thanks of sorts? I don't know) but he is a pretty selfish guy <3 XD Can't change the character, yanno!

Aha, thanks ^^

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hrivend March 26 2009, 01:38:55 UTC
hahahahaa, yeah, abel like it a lot xD,

sure he is clingy, i bet that he got up in the middle of the nigth and go to cuddle with abel lol. yea that was kind of sweet.

c: any way xD, i like the fic

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v0lka April 10 2009, 04:49:55 UTC
you're an amazing writer. i love your fanfics<3
may i add you?

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ensnarement April 10 2009, 04:56:25 UTC
Yes of course! I don't mind ^^; I'm honored that you like my work enough to want to watch me :

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ensnarement April 27 2009, 01:13:34 UTC
AHAHAHA. CB

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