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enjoythe_ride

[cl] 19. Twilight

Jun 28, 2010 19:45

[Set in Shelter: The Teen Years. gramslilpicasso is used with permission and love.]

“Mom, are vampires attractive?”Bela blinked in confusion at the sudden question, trying to figure out where that train of thought had come from. Sara-Rose was sitting at the counter, leaning over her bowl of cereal as she waited for her mother to answer ( Read more... )

challenge}: cl - 100 summer drabbles, verse: michael}: shelter, with}: sara-rose westen, comm}: charloft

Comments 4

ooc gramslilpicasso June 28 2010, 23:59:30 UTC

Awww I love this. And I love how you grasped their relationship. She doesn't cling to one parent over the other like her brother and sister do, but her mom is definitely her rock. She could care less what anyone thinks of her artwork, but getting Bela's praise on her work really makes her feel like she accomplished something. And I think there's a large piece of her that relishes the singled out attention when she gets it.

Okay. Ramble. Sorry.

We both loved this.

Re: ooc enjoythe_ride June 29 2010, 00:05:57 UTC

Awww, it's okay, I love the ramble.

I'm glad you liked it!

ooc nerdherdchuck June 29 2010, 03:31:03 UTC

I got to the definition in the middle and had to chuckle. Great job overall too. :D

Re: ooc enjoythe_ride June 29 2010, 03:36:13 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.