Fic: The Idea of Order: First Things

[enitharmonwept]

Title: The Idea of Order: First Things

Pairing: Ten/Martha

Rating: NC-17

Setting: post-S4

Summary: Tenth Doctor. Martha. Sex.

A/N: For persiflage_1 , on the anniversary of her birth.
Because, really, personalized pr0n? What more could a girl ask for?

Beta'd by the ever-radiant radiantbaby

Comments

[persiflage_1]

I ♥ you!

That is very clever and quite brilliant. Thank you very much for my birthday present!!

[fourzoas]

You're very welcome! Thank you for giving me an occasion to write it.

It wants to be a bit more epic, though, and I've already started sketching out the in-between...filthy bunnies!

I hope your day is as awesome as you!

[persiflage_1]

*blushes* Thank you!!

And a sequel? *hugs*

[fourzoas]

And a sequel?

Yes. The last bit of this, actually, was the original sequel I considered, but after I wrote it, I realized it belonged in this bit. But yes, there's more to come, I think...

[jadekirk]

*fans self* That was hot.

[fourzoas]

*clears throat*

glad I could heat things...

BTW--icon? Love.

[jadekirk]

Thanks. It's free to snag. :D

[fourzoas]

Hehe! Will do! Thanks!

[radiantbaby]

This fic is made of so much awesome! Really. I could read it again and again (and, trust me, I kept reading the beta copy many times because I love it so much!). I like the little small changes that you made and, of course, I just love the whole story.

There is something so erotic about all the timey-wimey stuff between Ten/Martha in this and all the different timelines converging. I think the whole letter thing is positively brilliant and the whole bit with Ten and Martha in the kitchen watching another set of themselves having sex just hits me on both a exhibitionist and voyeuristic kink so soundly. So delicious!

I wasn't lying when I said this could be my fave Ten/Martha story ever. This is truly amazing stuff! I can't wait to read the sequel! :)

[fourzoas]

the whole bit with Ten and Martha in the kitchen watching another set of themselves having sex just hits me on both a exhibitionist and voyeuristic kink so soundly.

I have to admit that I'm still a bit surprised that I even wrote that element into the story (although it really revolves around that, doesn't it?) since I've never thought of that as a particular interest of mine. Little did I know...

I'm working on the sequel this morning; hope to have a file to send by tomorrow. I need to get this out of my head so I can get back to John and Martha. They're getting impatient...

[fatchickengirl]

Very hot and what is the use of being a Timelord if youc an't work it into your sex life...

[fourzoas]

LOL--Exactly! I can't imagine that the thought hasn't crossed his mind a time or two....

Glad you enjoyed!

[padawanpooh]

*fans self*

Oh my, that was wonderful!!!

[fourzoas]

Glad you enjoyed it! They really are a smoking hot pair!