Unsuffer Me- Part II

[enigmatic_blue]

On we go. Cross-posted to seven_seasons once again.

Previous parts can be found here.

Comments

[effulgent_girl]

Woah. Hello there. Wasn't expecting them to go right at it like that but if it's a short story you would have to speed things up. But I like it:D Looking forward to what comes next.

[enigmatic_blue]

Heh. Thanks. This is definitely a different angle for me, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[louise39]

What was one more sin to add to the list?

From their actions and expectations, they both had death wishes but then...pain, pleasure and deep uneasse.

I like that 5 days of circling before Spike made a move. It was not an instant decision. Buffy also had 5 days before she opened her door.

[enigmatic_blue]

Thank you. No, it wasn't instant for either of them. Although those five days aren't detailed, they are important.

[rebcake]

My, my. Little Buffy is all grown up, isn't she? Thanks for posting again so soon!

I almost think chapter one and two could be one chapter, what with the "letting Spike in" scene being split like it is. Gotta say, though, love the action!

[enigmatic_blue]

Thank you. This story is one of the few I've written where it probably isn't completely serialized, and should be read as one whole. Unfortunately, LJ doesn't quite let me get away with that.

[fangfaceandrea]

Huh. Wasn't expecting that so fast. It' refreshing XD

I like that you're writing to the point cause it goes according to what's happening in the story, not much embelishing but with enough information to know how crappy they're both feeling.

XD

[enigmatic_blue]

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying this take. It's a different angle for me.

[slaymesoftly]

Well, that was a surprise. But a good one. Nothing's easy for these two, nor should it be at this point in their lives.

[enigmatic_blue]

Thank you! No, nothing is easy, and it's not going to get any easier.