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englishblue

A Thousand Kisses Deep Chapter 5

Jul 13, 2009 14:34

A new chapter of A Thousand Kisses Deep. I hope you enjoy it. The spirit is low today so I'm not sure if I should be posting this. It may very well be crap. :( Okay. Here goes.

( let be be finale of seem, the only emperor is the emperor of ice cream. )

au, jensen/jared, j2, nc-17, a thousand kisses deep

Comments 53

mangacat201 July 13 2009, 22:06:27 UTC

MWEAHAEWHEWAHeawheawhaew.aew....
I admit, it had a bit of an.. uncoordinated feel to it. But they had ACTION YAY and Jensen's 'monologue' that was really cool. Plus getting our dear Captian riled up like that, finally showing some cracks and splinters. EHEhee.. not to mention actually breaking and entering *g*
Cat

englishblue July 13 2009, 22:20:13 UTC

I'm sorry it wasn't smooth. I did my best, but after so many read throughs, I couldn't face another one. I'm really glad you liked the ACTION!part. And the riled up Captain.

Thanks for commenting. I'll try to do better next time.

mangacat201 July 14 2009, 06:42:35 UTC

Yeah I know, sometimes you do more harm then good the more you brood over it. I kinda never reread my stuff (if not within a years distance or so) not even thoroughly for beta corrections. I can't stand it *g*
I'm sure you'll be up to your game in no time... think a new chap of DKH will help?... cause I'm posting, today.
Cat

englishblue July 14 2009, 06:52:38 UTC

Hmmmm. I'll have to go searching for it. It hasn't popped up on my flist yet?

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surevesta July 13 2009, 22:09:58 UTC

YAY! You wrote more!! <3

englishblue July 13 2009, 22:21:11 UTC

Yup! About time I did. Hope you liked it. :) (sorry you're tired)

candygramme July 13 2009, 22:13:41 UTC

THat so does NOT suck. The abortive sex scene was wonderful, and I am so glad poor Jensen is out of the rosebush at last.

Now all he needs is to find a way to persuade, cajole or winkle Jared out of his ghostly hidey hole.

Loved it, babe.

englishblue July 13 2009, 22:24:17 UTC

Out of the rosebush just for you, hon. I'm tickled you liked the almost sex scene. I figured after five chapters it was about time they got a little physical.

Now Jensen has to woo a pouting Jared. That should be fun.

*hugs you tight*

adja999 July 13 2009, 22:29:39 UTC

Holy crap!!! That's all I can say right now. This chapter was amazing, I mean... wow, that kiss!! I didn't expect anything so soon, and I know things are far from worked out but, god, you showed us how hot they can be together.

Jensen doesn't want Jared gone, didn't, even in his drunken, freaked out state. That's big.

And what he said at the end? Actual goose bumps on my skin, seriously.

He admits it, and although he wants to fight it, he doesn't want Jared gone. better, he wants him around.

Whee!!!!

englishblue July 13 2009, 22:53:46 UTC

LOL I figured after 5 chapters the guys deserved a little snog. Especially Jensen.

He's had it a bit rough, but unfortunately, this is only going to make it more difficult for him, because now he's going to have to admit the fussing and fighting has gotten him a little...hot.

He most definitely wants Jared back. The cottage isn't the same without him.

I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Thank you!

adja999 July 13 2009, 22:58:07 UTC

Oh, and I totally LOVE your icon. I don't what is it about it but... i just do.

I had a question for my fellow J obsessed. Does Jared or Jensen have any known tattoos? I don't think so but I might have missed something. Like... for years no one knew Mike had one. Any clue?

englishblue July 13 2009, 23:06:42 UTC

Thank you. I love the soft colors and the look on his face.

As far as I know, the Js don't have any tattoos. At least, I've never heard anybody mention one. o.o