Comments | englishblue: Mystery Chapter 7

englishblue

Mystery Chapter 7

Mar 10, 2009 19:26

After a delay for an infected computer, visits from two technicians, one from the cable company and one from a mobile service, I'm in business again. I had thought to have this up four or five days ago. Hopefully, I've got my momentum back and things will be rolling towards a conclusion now.

( Breathless, we flung us on the windy hill, Laughed in the sun and kissed the lovely grass. )

mystery, au, jensen/jared, j2, nc-17

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2sexyboys March 11 2009, 03:05:14 UTC

oooooooooooooooooooooooooh exciting chapter. Who is after Jensen? And will Jared be able to protect him with his feeling for Jen in the way. Loved it. Been waiting. Can't wait for more

englishblue March 11 2009, 04:50:53 UTC

The news has spread already. Someone wants to be sure Jensen stays dead. I'm thrilled you liked it. Thank you so much for commenting, sweet lady.

candygramme March 11 2009, 03:06:59 UTC

Eeee! It's getting to the boiling point, and you hung me off the cliff! That's cruel and unusual!

I need to know, dammit!

Awesome story telling, and pretty writing as usual.

Jared's frustration is never plainer than : He wants to go in there and shake the bastard until his teeth rattle. He wants to go in there and fuck his fucking lights out.

Lovely!

englishblue March 11 2009, 04:53:18 UTC

Yay! Cliffhangers were once my specialty in the long ago and far away. I could have made the chapter longer, but I wanted to get it out after being shutdown for ulcer-making days. Thank you, honeybun. You always make me feel great!

angels3 March 11 2009, 03:38:28 UTC

Well shit the bastard got away damn it!

Bet you that freaked Jensen the hell out.

Loved the elevator wrestling. :)

englishblue March 11 2009, 04:55:33 UTC

Hee. Yay for elevator wrestling. I'm so glad you liked it, sweetie.

I think Jensen's finally going to see the error of his way and pay more attention to what Jared tells him from now on! :) At least...sometimes.

realpestilence March 11 2009, 03:54:01 UTC

You made me blush! :D

englishblue March 11 2009, 04:56:38 UTC

I did? I hope it was in a good way. How'd I do that?

realpestilence March 11 2009, 08:24:34 UTC

That kiss! All that ripe fruit and juice running everywhere, and then the image of Jared throwing Jensen down on the elevator floor and rutting like dogs...*clears throat*

It doesn't help to have that picture of Jensen staring at me while I'm reading, you know! :D

englishblue March 12 2009, 17:23:25 UTC

Ah, you liked the kiss. That makes me very happy. Kisses are so hard to describe, and the doggie image.

This picture of Jensen makes everything better. I use to change my layout every 5 minutes, but I can't leave him.

duohatesrelena March 11 2009, 06:09:40 UTC

Oh snap! Who is it?

englishblue March 11 2009, 06:21:46 UTC

That would be telling. ;D