MK Ultra (Chapter Fourteen/?)

Jul 14, 2011 15:01

He was tired. So, so tired. Tired of his life and what it had become, tired of what he had become, and tired of his love for Matthew. He hated that the brunet had so much power over him. With a single word, he could - and had - crush Dominic’s world into dust. He knew his place now: on the floor at Matthew’s feet. He was the slave: the slave to ( Read more... )

mk ultra, au, series, angst, pg, muse, belldom, mk meme

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muse_manticore July 14 2011, 15:47:15 UTC
I just went SQUEEEE!

Aww he's so troubled and Dom wants to help him but he's so scared. I love this fic so much, I want to pick it up and cuddle it.

*snuggs*

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engel_sehnsucht July 15 2011, 15:21:20 UTC
Hehe aww. :3

Such a dilemma. :\

Thank you! *cuddles*

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theyellow_daisy July 14 2011, 15:59:39 UTC
Argh! Matt is so conflicted! But this looks like a start to better things...I hope. Him finally saying those three words, should help. You've got me all worked up now,lol!

Wonderful job. Beautifully written. Thank you!!

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engel_sehnsucht July 15 2011, 15:21:49 UTC
Hopefully, yes... we'll see. ;)

Thank you!

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thekeyholder July 14 2011, 17:13:34 UTC
He had ignored the homophobia as best he could, telling himself that they would change when he came out as gay; stupidly, he had believed himself, a mistake that was so huge that he would never forgive himself.

Awww, poor Matt! I'm so so sorry about him!

He wanted to love Dominic, and to give him all that he desired and more; he was willing to learn from Dominic, to learn how to love as he knew in the depths of his soul that he could.

Here's hope!!! <3 I know Matt can change with Dom's help!!!

Wow, the ending! I wonder if Dom was awake!!! MORE MORE MORE please!

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engel_sehnsucht July 15 2011, 15:22:45 UTC
I know, Matt's... hurt.

Hehe, I hope they can help each other. ♥

Thank you, Brigi! As soon as possible, I pwomise.

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starlight_myth July 14 2011, 18:14:01 UTC
Oh. My. God.

Every time I read this story I'm lost for words. In a good way! I felt immensely sorry for Matthew. Whatever happened to him was so wrong. And there is only one person who could make the pain go away and he knows this.

Dominic. Oh Dominic. He makes me cry! He's so selfless. I hope his little declaration wasn't in his sleep. Oh please! They are so close! Just make it happen, Anita!

And your writing is flawless, girl. This is one of your best works! Much love!

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engel_sehnsucht July 15 2011, 15:26:21 UTC
Matt is hurting... but at least he's realised that Dom can help. It seems that the depth of his hurt is deeper than originally thought.

Dominic is so lovely... I'd love to know someone like him. Hmm, we'll see... ;)

Thank you so, so much, Myth.

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unomusette July 14 2011, 21:51:55 UTC
Lots of deep thought here, and constructive on Matthew's side by the sound of it, which can only be a jolly good thing. Such a positive ending too, nice one!
x

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engel_sehnsucht July 15 2011, 15:26:42 UTC
Thank you!
x

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