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engel_sehnsucht

MK Ultra (Chapter Eight/?)

Jan 02, 2011 22:26

Matthew knocked on Chris’ front door, stamping to keep the blood flowing to and warming his feet. He didn't have to wait long; the door was soon opened by his friend.

‘Mate!’ Chris cried in greeting, pulling Matt into a rib-crushing hug. ‘How’s it going? Come in.’

Chris took Matt’s coat and red scarf, draping them over a radiator. Matt raised an ( Read more... )

[length] series, [writing] mk meme, [rating] 15/r, [type] au, [title] mk ultra, [pairing] belldom

Comments 28

loveish68 January 2 2011, 23:29:04 UTC

*takes a deep breath*

I don't know what it is about this fic, but by the end of each chapter I'm holding my breath and my heart is hammering against my ribs. Wonderful as always. I think maybe I can relate somewhat to Dom (gah, sounds ridiculous doesn't it?)

Dominic’s hair was highlighted by the faint light coming from the kitchen down the hall, his features shadowed. Matthew could see his large grey eyes glinting in the dim illumination

One of my favourite lines. To me I felt like the darkness of the room was kind of like how Matt viewed the world, or at least his own character...but to have Dom illuminated like that, it was sort of like Matt saw Dom as his guiding light (excuse the Muse reference but it fits). I just thought that scene was very well written and like I said, I was feeling Dom's uncertainty, fear and desperation to please Matt so strongly, it had me on the edge of my seat.

Again, amazing update, can't wait for the next chapter!

engel_sehnsucht January 3 2011, 15:02:14 UTC

Oh my god, where to start! Thank you for that amazing comment. :D

No, it's not ridiculous to feel like you're relating to Dom, I've had a couple of people say that now, and about Matt too.

You called Dom Matt's guiding light: that's exactly what he is. He's illuminating Matt's dark world. :D

Again, thank you! <3

romierased January 2 2011, 23:58:16 UTC

FUCK YES!!! *goes to read* <333333333333

engel_sehnsucht January 3 2011, 14:57:01 UTC

Aha, thank you! :') <33

muse_manticore January 3 2011, 00:07:13 UTC

Awww this one was sweet.
His icy persona is beginning to melt. :)

<3

engel_sehnsucht January 3 2011, 14:57:17 UTC

Thank you! <3

stilettoxmafia January 3 2011, 01:20:48 UTC

Matt's fascade is rapidly deteriorating and for the better!

What an interesting Christmas it will be...

engel_sehnsucht January 3 2011, 14:57:48 UTC

Yeah, the effect Dom's having on him is showing. Thank you for reading!

herverylowness January 3 2011, 03:17:14 UTC

Oh wonderful! Though it would be nice if Matt would admit how he felt to Dom. I'm glad Dom admitted it!

engel_sehnsucht January 3 2011, 14:58:42 UTC

Thank you, Jesse! <3 Yeah, Matt edged around it, didn't he?