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Jan 30, 2010 15:26
Title: Pink (
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yoochunlove
January 30 2010, 18:02:16 UTC
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engbreakfast
January 30 2010, 18:39:47 UTC
thank you for reading (:
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musicdorch
January 30 2010, 18:23:33 UTC
This was a great read! Loved it.
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engbreakfast
January 30 2010, 18:40:16 UTC
aw thank you so much :D
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dongbangsuju20
February 1 2010, 22:32:53 UTC
first, I told you I don't like first person POV so much, but I have read this and it is really interesting <3
I like your characterization, though it was not the usual dbsk member characters~
like junsu's for example XDD
I love jaechun's relationship ♥
and also how Changmin is sacrificed, kind of, for that..
poor jae .-.
broken jaemin~~ >ö<
and I was kinda surprised about the color things you put into this, like jaejoong's pink obsession haha XD
but it fits somehow and I like it ^-^
the plot is really interesting and I am always amazed to read AUs like that since I suck at AUs x-x
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engbreakfast
February 2 2010, 09:53:18 UTC
thank you for reading :D
i feel bad for the characterization actually, poor junsu went all evil and yunho was a druggie ): i didn't know how to change it.
i'm so so so glad you liked it!! i was really nervous posting it at first but now i really like the feedback (:
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dilidididitgirl
February 3 2010, 10:54:32 UTC
That was fantastic, I loved it. ♥
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engbreakfast
February 3 2010, 12:46:14 UTC
thank you bb!
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I like your characterization, though it was not the usual dbsk member characters~
like junsu's for example XDD
I love jaechun's relationship ♥
and also how Changmin is sacrificed, kind of, for that..
poor jae .-.
broken jaemin~~ >ö<
and I was kinda surprised about the color things you put into this, like jaejoong's pink obsession haha XD
but it fits somehow and I like it ^-^
the plot is really interesting and I am always amazed to read AUs like that since I suck at AUs x-x
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i feel bad for the characterization actually, poor junsu went all evil and yunho was a druggie ): i didn't know how to change it.
i'm so so so glad you liked it!! i was really nervous posting it at first but now i really like the feedback (:
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