Equus - Gouged out
Title: Gouged out
Fandom: Peter Shaffer: Equus
Characters: Alan Strang, Ironkneader, the horse
Beta reader: Locutus
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst, dark, drama
Disclaimer: Peter Shaffer owns the Equusverse - I just play with it. No money is made from this amateur work.
Warnings: torture, craziness
Summary: A boy takes revenge on a horse.
( Gouged out )
Fandom: Peter Shaffer: Equus
Characters: Alan Strang, Ironkneader, the horse
Beta reader: Locutus
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst, dark, drama
Disclaimer: Peter Shaffer owns the Equusverse - I just play with it. No money is made from this amateur work.
Warnings: torture, craziness
Summary: A boy takes revenge on a horse.
( Gouged out )
Comments 2
Hát nem én vagyok a legjobb angolos...de :escape from, doesn't let him go.
Fanficet egyszerű múltban írnak ha kell present/past perfectet használnak, ez persze nem a párbeszédekre hanem az elbeszélésre igaz.
Remélem jókat írtam...
Thymea
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Most láttam csak, hogy írtál. Javítottam is, amit javasoltál.
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