[CONCRIT]

[endlessjunes]

I forgot to make one of these sooner, but seeing as I desperately need this for this account, HERE IS CONCRIT!!

Drop any concerns, comments, suggestions, etc. here! ALL COMMENTS ARE SCREENED AND ANON IS ENABLED//IP LOGGING IS OFF!!

Thank you! ♥

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[anonymous]

[endlessjunes]

Thank you ;A;

I guess it's a little hard to explain which point he's from since this game runs on the Persona 4 storyline, but it's AU so... things aren't necessarily happening in order or happening the same way |D;; But ah-- he's gone through a couple of dungeons, including his own.

The thing I have the most difficulty deciding is when to be a jerk and to who, I think. Like, he really can say jerkish things even to his best friends XD but then, he's nicer on people like say, Saki-senpai.

But anyway |D;; THANK YOU VERY MUCH for reading and sending me some crit! I really appreciate it! ;w; ♥♥♥