burning out like the sun

Jan 02, 2010 23:35

A/N: Spoilers for both the Christmas and the New Year's special.

In the middle of the night he's woken up by an older man in his dress robes, nothing is said and he knows that it is time. He looks to the boy not far from him that he's just made friends with since arriving, curled up on his side and remembering him only saying that he ran. He ( Read more... )

what: fic

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quitehomoerotic January 3 2010, 07:38:28 UTC
As I told you, lovely, I think this is extremely good. I really like the form of it, with the snapshots, and it shows what I think is a really nice insight into certain aspects of the character.

Brilliant work.

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endlessdrums January 3 2010, 07:56:08 UTC
Thank you so much! I was hoping it didn't come off as jumbled or rushed, I had to keep stopping to try and avoid that and come back to it.

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im_thedoctor January 3 2010, 07:46:24 UTC
Oooh. I LOVE it, baby! *pets the Master tons and tons and tons and tons*

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endlessdrums January 3 2010, 07:56:55 UTC
Thank you baby, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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rude_not_ginger January 3 2010, 08:19:41 UTC
This is just fantastic. UGSOBUGSOUS

Repetition is one of my favorite literary techniques, and it's perfectly executed here. The Master is crisp and clear and wonderful. I just love it.

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I could use the right journal :\ endlessdrums January 4 2010, 08:17:25 UTC
I'm so glad you think so! I was worried I was rushing it towards the end there. I also couldn't not have it end the way it did, as the Master will always come back.

I have a special place in my heart for repetition as well, thank you so much for the compliment, you should stop spoiling me. It still is so odd looking at the differences in portrayals from one actor. *hugs*

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