Ficlet: 'Everything' (Ender/Bonzo) R

[mooncharm]

Title: Everything
Author: Charm ~ mooncharm
Pairing: Ender/Bonzo
Rating: R
Warnings: Non/dubious-consent and the boys are underaged.
Disclaimer: They're not mine and they never will be. No copyright infringement is intended.
Notes: For riverflame.

Comments

[marseverlasting]

First, I must get my bias out of the way. Sex in Enderverse squicks me a bit, just because of their ages, but from a literary standpoint, I can see the... what's the right word... I can see the intent of using it. Sex being humanity at its weakest, etc. etc

[mooncharm]

Good gods woman that is a REVIEW!!!!

You have left me completely flushed and grinning! And I know just what you mean. The sex seems a bit squicky, and yet is is a powerful piece of how things are and how fast they've had to grow up. And guh, Bonzo. I adore Bonzo so very much and I am so relieved that he came out alright and I didn't mangle him too bad.

To summarize: conclusion was fucking great.

Thank you so much, that means so much to me!!

I've written four pieces in the Enderverse so far (2 Ender/Beans, 1 Ender/Peter, and this one) and I do certainly intend to write more, especially with such wonderful inspiration! *hugs* Thanks so much, love!

[marseverlasting]

Hehehe, sorry to disappoint you, but I be a boy.

But yeah, I love these little one-offs you do. They're really quite good. I demand more :)

And now I must go back and re-read the Ender/Peter one you wrote. I remember it (actually, I remember the Daniel Radcliffe icon) and will promptly squee with joy.

Moooooooooooooore! Honestly, any pairing, as long as it's enderverseeeee.

[mooncharm]

Hehehe, sorry to disappoint you, but I be a boy.

*facepalm*

This is what happens when you play fandom with almost strictly women, sorry about that, love.

And disappointed I am not cos there is truly nothing better than a fanboy! You've made my night! :D

But yeah, I love these little one-offs you do. They're really quite good. I demand more

Demands will get you everywhere...

*loves*

[gabo0]

Hi!
What can I say? It was breathtaking. It's true what they said, I could actually feel *relieve* as Ender did It was.. beautifully written.
I have a problem with their ages, picturing them doing stuff while they're so young.. but I know the effect of it. And the way they act.. if everything is so over developed on their minds, attraction would reside on the next step. that would be, they would be mentally prepared to have sex.
But.. well, what can I say again? An awesome couple. I'm kind of new into Ender slash, but since I read the book for the first time, I thought: this is a perfectbook to write slash of xD.
And I'm oh-so-happy I found this community ^^!
GaB

[mooncharm]

I'm so glad you found it too :) Enderslash is love. Thanks so much for the feedback! :*