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[nomoreillusions]

*epic sobs*

OMG that was horrifically, wonderfully sad. :(

[encryptedlock]

<3 Thanks! I love this pairing to death.

[nomoreillusions]

Yah, sadly overlooked.. But then, it's hard when there's such a minimal and obscure reference to Carolina to begin with..

<3

[encryptedlock]

Yeahhh...I can always hope for a flashback miniseries, right?

[agent_south]

Goddamn...now I really want to cry, reading that.

The style is really great too..not something that is usually seen but it makes it more...real somehow. And stark.

[encryptedlock]

I see it as really tragic what happens to her. Poor girl. Plus it gives York some nice tragic backstory, too.

And yeah, usually I don't do present tense, but this was for a "memory" prompt so it was a good exercise.

(I like getting into his head.)

[athenakt]

I love your use of the video log to describe the events. We can only imagine the huge amount of guilt, despair, and anger that York must be feeling. After all, he and Delta recommended her for implantation...

*happily joins the small invasion here*

[encryptedlock]

Yeah, I like to think her death was one of the main reasons he skipped out on the Project. Of course it's all speculation unless we get that Freelancer flashback miniseries....