LJ Idol Season 10: Week 23 - Lethargy

Jul 05, 2017 19:19

Another sunrise ( Read more... )

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beeker121 July 10 2017, 01:42:11 UTC
This is a lovely use of repetition to lull us the emotion. This couplet "Another language, Another way to say it wrong" made me flinch, it so describes that place where nothing is going to make a difference.

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bewize July 10 2017, 17:39:59 UTC
Beautiful job.

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flipflop_diva July 10 2017, 21:28:30 UTC
The use of the word another really works well with the prompt for this. As does the melody and the way you sing it. It's very beautiful, but yet very sad too.

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