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Sparks 5

Sep 07, 2009 17:49

Title: Sparks 5
Author: enchanted_jae
Characters: Ron, Greg, Neville, Pansy, Hermione, Blaise, McGonagall
Rating: PG
Warning(s): Suggestion
Word count: 1610
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble/fic was written for fun, not for profit.
Author's note: Written as a birthday gift for vengence_on_ice, who asked for an update to "Sparks" with ( Read more... )

gift: birthday, rating: pg, content: pre-slash, verse: sparks, content: eighth year, content: hogwarts era

Comments 24

fancypantsdylan September 8 2009, 10:57:47 UTC

I do feel sorry for Ron but I feel sorrier for Greg, although I loved his insight into Draco's problem, shame we didn't see Ron's opinion of it, hehe.

Neville is so sweet, I hope he can coax Pansey out of her shell.

Hermione and Blaise though were the funniest. I even thought he was coming on to her, but then to left drop it was Ginny he's interested in, brilliant.

faithwood September 8 2009, 14:30:25 UTC

Squee! Great update, love!

kaykayen September 8 2009, 17:05:20 UTC

Love Greg here! But I want to know what Ron's reaction is to Greg's statement about Draco!

jtsbbsps_dk September 8 2009, 19:43:21 UTC

Yay! Neville and Pansy are so cute! ♥

And LOL! at Greg's straightforwardness! XD

And much love to Blaise as well, the Casanova :b

vengence_on_ice September 8 2009, 21:08:38 UTC

Aww. Thank you, my dear Jae. It's fabulous. I particularly like Blaise's annoying attempts to butter up the friend of his crush. I'm also kind of glad that he's not the skeezball he could have been. And I love love love your use of my word in the scene with Pansy and Neville. Too sweet.