Comments | enchanted_april: Beneath the Surface

enchanted_april

Beneath the Surface - Pt 55

May 29, 2006 22:30

Just a bit more to go. I think I will be keeping to my schedule of finishing this by May 31st, with a possible June1st date for the epilogue. It's funny that this one is shorter, and has taken just a bit less time to write than Saints and Saviors. I guess that my speed has generally been the same for all this time. As a side note, this story ( Read more... )

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brynnamorgan May 30 2006, 02:45:39 UTC

“Enough talk. You’re being kidnapped, remember? Don’t try anything funny and I won’t have to use my cane on you,” he said, raising it in a half-heartedly menacing move.

Ohhh, to be kidnapped by House! She'd be a fool to fight that one. RAWR!

pbvalla May 30 2006, 02:54:33 UTC

Awww. Gotta love the kidnapping! XD

I'll be sad to see this fic go. You've done a lovely job keeping true to character with them in an established relationship. Really.

steph0202 May 30 2006, 02:57:38 UTC

Reading this while I eat lunch and nearly choked when I read this:

“Enough talk. You’re being kidnapped, remember? Don’t try anything funny and I won’t have to use my cane on you,” he said, raising it in a half-heartedly menacing move.

Too funny. Great work. I don't want it to end but I know it must. *sob*

lea724 May 30 2006, 03:06:16 UTC

Hard to believe the fic is almost over. Are you going to be placing this one, in its entirety on your website?

He would look at her out of the corner of his eye, or bump her in the kitchen when he saw her looking too thoughtful, or run a teasing hand up her side when she got into bed and faced away from him.

Aww, I love that!

I noticed a few typos, if you're interested:

She’d spent idle moments during the past week recited the litany

Did you mean "reciting the litany"?

At ever stage, she’d told House what was going on

Did you mean "At every stage"?

enchanted_april May 30 2006, 03:33:26 UTC

Yes, it will be going up on the website, and thank you for catching the typos :)

jovsg May 30 2006, 03:43:00 UTC

Now do you see why she's MY beta? And why I lurrrrve her to death?

OK, my adoration for this chappie can not be understated, but I have to wait to get sustenance in me first, and then I shall leave a comment. *nods*

yutamiyu May 30 2006, 14:17:23 UTC

Oy. In my defense, she posted this (and your beta posted her comment) before I was able to look over it.

So neener.

...I'm so mature.

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beeeez May 30 2006, 03:59:38 UTC

God, I love this story. It's sad to think there's not going to be much more. I will miss it :)

Nice work, as always.