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enchanted_april

Beneath the Surface - Pt 52

May 22, 2006 23:42

Moving and New Year's Eve, and after this, you can expect a bit of a time lapse in the story as I pull them towards springtime :) I did some revisions in my outline and actually think that I will be wrapping it up in two more chapters, rather than four... something which I'm sure will relieve some of you! That probably means about 5-8 more parts ( Read more... )

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beeeez May 23 2006, 04:03:22 UTC

Aw, that was adorable!!! I loved the description of the move in. And House reminding her that she lived here now.

And can so totally relate to the irritating host of NYE live broadcasts :P

beeeez May 23 2006, 04:03:50 UTC

And FIRST!!!

Cause I'm silly like that :P

vgsgirl May 23 2006, 04:04:29 UTC

Aww, that was fantastic. Not overly sappy at all. I think you're doing an amazing job with this story, and your attempt to show the gradual progression of their relationship is spot on. I haven't been around much recently, so sorry for the lack of feedback on previous chapters, but i just caught up today. I have to say that i'm still very much loving this story as much as ever, and i will be very sad to see it go. Loved this chapter and am looking forward to the rest!

lea724 May 23 2006, 04:06:46 UTC

Very sweet chapter (sweet as in "awww," not sweet as in "dude! sweet!")

and pinching Cameron’s ass when she bent over to lift things. He’d claimed it was a reminder to lift with her knees, not her back.

This was interesting, 'cause personally? I absolutely cannot stand getting my butt pinched or slapped or anything like that. So to see House do that made me mentally growl, but then the very next line soothed out the annoyance. :)

she could stop looking like a visitor and start looking like she owned the place, oh and by the way, part ownership included getting him another beer while she was up.

Lol!

u2girl77 May 23 2006, 04:11:14 UTC

I thought the ass pinching was so appropriate. Do all guys do that? Anyway, it was great!

brynnamorgan May 23 2006, 04:29:28 UTC

telling her that she could stop looking like a visitor and start looking like she owned the place, oh and by the way, part ownership included getting him another beer while she was up.

Very House, very funny! LOL!

Overall wonderful, of course!