fic time!

May 23, 2007 13:07

Title: Dancing Drama
Author: hd_obsession
Summary: The boys go out dancing. Truths are revealed. For hd_falling's Merry Month of May Fest
Warnings: Fluff.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don’t own the boys. If I did, they would definitely NOT be enemies
Word Count: 1,154
Beta: The amazing kcstories I don’t know what I would have done without you babe!!!
Prompt: May 23, 3007. ( Club pic )

harry and draco are in love, challenge, fics:harry/draco

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Comments 33

horcru_x May 23 2007, 18:30:17 UTC
Whee! That was adorable. :D I love the conversation of the two right after Harry drank the potion. ^^

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enablelove May 23 2007, 18:36:49 UTC
haha thanks!!! :D

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flawless_beauti May 23 2007, 18:30:24 UTC
It was a bit OOC and you weren't lying when you said fluff.

Other than the OOC it was wonderful, and even if I don't like alot of fluff you managed to pull it off stunningly.

Oh, and the last line has lots of love attached.

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enablelove May 23 2007, 18:37:31 UTC
yeah it is a bit OOC, and I LOVE fluff, so sorry!!! haha

Thank you! :)

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flawless_beauti May 23 2007, 18:39:17 UTC
No problem!

Your avatar by the way is like woah. Where'd you get it?

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enablelove May 23 2007, 20:26:23 UTC
This one? It's from hp_pens_icons :D

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satinea May 23 2007, 19:13:47 UTC
Ah, this was cute :). And yay for Malfoysexual!Harry :P.

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enablelove May 23 2007, 20:28:46 UTC
Thank you very much!

That's the best kind ;)

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elleian May 23 2007, 19:20:42 UTC
*grins widely* I love fics where Harry and Draco both want each other but think that the other isn't interested.

The club was bright, the music was contagious, and the drinks were flowing. - I liked how this line conjured up such vivid imagery in my mind of the club with such little description.

He wanted Draco to be his and his alone - for real; forever. - I think this was one of my favourite lines. Oh, Harry!

Great stuff! ♥

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enablelove May 23 2007, 20:29:40 UTC
Thanks so much babe! Your comment has ME grinning widely :D

(that second lines my fave too!)

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tresa_cho May 23 2007, 20:10:10 UTC
Awesome story! I like how they have to 'dance' around each other at the beginning. The writing was a little bit choppy at bits, I think if you described a bit more, and made the story longer, that would take care of it. Great job!

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enablelove May 23 2007, 20:30:45 UTC
Thank you!

Yeah, I am not the world's greatest writer, but I like the other one I wrote much better, check it out and let me know what you think :D

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