Fic: After All

Feb 06, 2008 13:59

Ugh, I'm so tired. I stayed up intil 5am with my soulmate
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keire_ke February 6 2008, 22:57:26 UTC
That was indeed disturbing, yet oddly fitting. I have such a low opinion of Sanzo. XD He still would have hell on his hands if Goku woke/realised what was going on.

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empyrealfantasy February 7 2008, 00:26:42 UTC
I adore Sanzo... but honestly, the creepy bastard role fits onto him too easily. XD Arrrrggg... I still can't believe I allowed myself to write this...

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candika February 6 2008, 23:12:46 UTC
*Shudders* Ugh...I can see what you mean! Beautifully written but I found it quite upsetting. Even in a recognised and established relationship I would consider this rape unless it had been discussed and agreed to beforehand.

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empyrealfantasy February 7 2008, 00:27:56 UTC
I agree entirely. As I said, I have no idea where this came from, and it's totally abnormal for me. *sobsob*

Sanzo's a bastard. *goes on a strike against him until he stops being a douche in her head*

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candika February 7 2008, 02:32:09 UTC
Hey, we've all got some pretty dark rooms in our heads. You should see some of my darkfic. It even scares me! Personally I think it's a lot healthier to know what's in them.

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empyrealfantasy February 7 2008, 02:34:15 UTC
Oh, I'm well aware of my darkspaces and kinks... *snerk*... but I've never written anything this bad before. I've read far, far, far (farfarfar) worse and actually enjoyed it... but I didn't know I had it in me to write it. XD Goodness...

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soliandxpyne February 7 2008, 05:01:52 UTC
Wahahahahaha! What's there to blame me for? I think this was a fabulously inspired little piece of porn. >:D Well done darling, hohoho.

Mmm, and I do love me some depraved Sanzo. >:d I liked how this had a vague, 'beneath the cover of night' feel to it, giving us some of the best details while leaving others to the reader's imagination. But I totally didn't expect Goku to have been sleeping!! LOL

Uwah, I should definitely write more, if it inspires stuff like this.

And if you want something really dirty and disturbing, you may be interesting in checking out my contribution to the kink meme, if you haven't already. >:3

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empyrealfantasy February 7 2008, 05:05:23 UTC
Yes, you should write more. You should hear the OTHER idea it inspired (STxyoukai!Sanzo subjugation, anyone?). <3

Leslie got me to read it ages ago. XD I had to wait until after I wrote my own contribution so I didnt unintentioanlly steal ideas, but when i read it... OMG... I was scared how hot I found it. XD Wow... you totally ruin me.. XD

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This icon, now more than ever soliandxpyne February 7 2008, 05:24:10 UTC
(STxyoukai!Sanzo subjugation, anyone?)

Dooooo iiiiit. <3<3<3

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Re: This icon, now more than ever purpleicicles February 7 2008, 13:53:06 UTC
*adds on* Noooooowwww!!!!!! Seriously creepy fic... though what's scarier is I can believe it! Sanzo does have a lot of creepy lurking under his skin, methinks... I think ST deserves the opportunity to get his own back! X)

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punkwolf39 February 7 2008, 05:32:26 UTC
I do not care how wrong it is... I WANT A SEQUEL!!! For some reason, I feel an obsessive need to know what would happen should Goku wake up. Really. My brain itches now.

This was my favorite type of smut. The kind that is smut, and you know it's smut, but doesn't sound like a porno movie script. Love it. Even if Sanzo's a creep bastard here. You portayed his creepyism suberbly. Awesome.

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empyrealfantasy February 7 2008, 05:35:38 UTC
This is my usual smut style. XD Its what I'm used to.

Leslie said she would be interested in seeing a continuation, too. But I have to hold off... because knowing how my brain is working today, it would be noncon or something. Don't ask me how... but it would be. XP

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animedark_witch February 7 2008, 07:46:13 UTC
Wow *giggles*.. Sanzo such a rapist.. (giggles) not that I like these types of ficts... I love them... of course if I try to write one it would be exstreamly past NC-17.. (laughes at self). You should totally make a sequal.

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