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empyrealfantasy

Into Temptation: Years 6 & 7

Jan 28, 2008 11:44

And I come bearing ficcie. :) I feel accomplished to get this story back on track again.

My smut writing skills are going away, i think... :( Because I am not happy with either of the mini-smuttish bits in here... *sigh*

Anyway, this installment is brought to you with love, and dedicated entirely to
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keire_ke January 28 2008, 20:49:15 UTC

This is lovely, I hope you know. The image of them growing up and settling into a married life so well makes me sigh happily in joy. <3

Gojyo making food made me laugh. XD

empyrealfantasy January 29 2008, 01:40:16 UTC

Thank you very much. :) I'm glad to have given amusement if only for a little while. :)

I wrote the Gojyo scene MONTHS ago, almost a year.. I'm happy its still good. XD

eyesofshinigami January 29 2008, 00:01:29 UTC

And I am quite content to have this dedicated to me, thank you very, very much. *GRIN*

These were love. Just pure, unadulterated love. You can definitely see how your style has matured (from the other years, though I love them no less than I love this set) and it worked so damn well for these!

I loved the 39 and 58 smut, you know that. Cordon Bleu cracked me up, and I adored the Domesticity. However, I think my favorites have to be Abjuration and Haunted. A wonderful way to begin these, and an even greater way to end them. It was absolutely satisfying to see Sanzo come to terms with what happened at Kinzan. Made my fangirl heart so very happy.

You did a marvelous job on these. Now I humbly await the next installment of LMN. XDDD <3 Thanks for writing these! *loves you*

empyrealfantasy January 29 2008, 00:06:39 UTC

Your comments never fail to make me happy, love. :)

I'm really glad you like. XD Only two years to go and then we're on to LMN... though I have the next chapter open and will be adding to it throughout the days... XD

I'm glad I managed Sanzo's ... acceptance/evolution... to an acceptable standard. That was a big point I wanted to make. XD Yay! *blows kisses*

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empyrealfantasy January 29 2008, 17:47:56 UTC

Thanks for the comment! ^___^ Keeping them in character while evolving them as people is sooo hard. I had a lot a lot of fun with all the years, though. XD Especially when I'm just writing the way they GOT to that point, and that is by far not as fun...

And yet... *cackle*

*blows kisses* Thankies again. :)

raineishida January 29 2008, 10:52:42 UTC

Hakkai and Gojyo were in character for that scene, yes. I'm amused at how the sex was cut in the version that you sent me yesterday. I read it anyway. It was good, but you're right in what you say and I'm sad to tell you, but you're right about the smut factor. This was not your best. My apologies, love. Tom and Harry have stolen you away from your deliciousness in Saiyuki. XD

Anyway, I must tell you that I think submissive Hakkai is totally weird...but nice, and then totally sexy when he takes over because Gojyo's totally uke in that relationship. We know Hakkai. All he has to do is smile his special smile and Gojyo feels the fear. Pwnage, man. XD

Love you babe.

empyrealfantasy January 29 2008, 17:45:47 UTC

The fact that you don't like more *dirty* sex scenes also comes into play there. XD But yes, its totally crap, methinks.

The only reason it wasn't in there before is because I wrote both of those yesterday morning. :P I couldn't think of a way to write Hakkai that was in character other than to make him angst, so I totally copped out on happy!Hakkai. ^^;

Ill have to go fight Voldemort to the death in order to get mah smut skillz back. Though I don't think he'll wanna share... O_O

HEY GUESS WHAT?!

I love you. :) As Ray would say "I love you allllllll the way to my heart!"

windwhisprer January 29 2008, 19:46:47 UTC

This was amazing! I loved these years. I'm so glad you're writing again, Empy! I hope to see more. ^___^

I lvoed Equality. You can totally see that working, and a lot of people seem to forget that they really are equals. Jeez. Those stupid people and the "Goku can't be on top." Or "Sanzo is a bottom, forever and ever." I don't know. I rather liked that one. Oh, and Ownership. Gojyo is a cutie pie. <3

empyrealfantasy January 29 2008, 20:36:08 UTC

Yay! XD Thanks, hun! :) I appreciate your words much. I agree on the equality factor... ugh. It drives me crazy when people get so hung up on seme and uke that they forget that most of the best relationships are equal things. Silly fangirls. I think it is just an excuse to overfeminize characters most of the time. XD