Broken wings and fractured hearts - fic

[emptyheaven]

Title: Broken wings and fractured hearts
Characters/parings: Castiel/Dean (slight), Sam, OFC
Rating: PG
Warnings: Major spoilers for 4x20

Summary: A strong emotion washed over him, sadness, he believed the humans called it. As it snuck into his very being and filled his eyes with tears he wondered why Anna had praised it so much. It hurt like

Comments

[kira_bouviea]

*sobs*

that was a good interpretation of everything.

[emptyheaven]

*hands tissues* thank you!

[midnight_elf]

I loved it but there were three incomplete sentences that broke the flow.

The place he called home, his sanctuary broke him. It was for his own good his superiors had told him but Castiel had felt like screaming as
“You do not serve them, especially him” he’d told Castiel, his voice emotionless, “You serve the Lord our God, not mere man. You have let human sins cloud your true eyes, for that you will lose the very thing you hold dear. Perhaps then you will be re-directed to the right path”.

Sam pulled the demon out of the girl as easily as Castiel had smote the two demons earlier.
Castiel watched as
Seeing that the job was done, Castiel took a deep breath and walked back to the task at hand. He knelt beside Jimmy, taking in his bloody midsection and harsh intakes of breath.

He took a moment to adjust, looking from the young girl kneeling before him to the Winchester boys standing with
Castiel stopped between the two men, turning so that he was facing Sam and looking towards the mother and daughter.

[emptyheaven]

Oh, you are kidding! *headdesk* thank you so much for pointing it out, seriously LJ has got some evil plot against me *grr*

edit: it should be fixed now, hate to be a bother but can you see any more similar mishaps?

[midnight_elf]

Yup they're fixed and seem to be the only mishaps.

[emptyheaven]

thank you :)

[ran_cl]

I am waiting to DL 4.21 and I saw this...
This was really good *sob* ...I like the way you describe what happened

[audreyblanche]

That was great and so well put.
Especially the last part, I could almost feel how cold and ...unfeeling Castiel was. And it fits perfectly with the episode, you found a good explanation of what they did to him after he was dragged back.
Also, your writing was touching, never too many and neither too little words between all that was said.

But I like to think, that Castiel said 'I serve heaven' for a reason, either because he's giving Dean a hint or - what I believe was your story background - because the angels told him so to put him in place. I was a little surprised when Zachariah pointed out that he should remember he serves God.

Great Job nevertheless, I really liked it.

[epsylon_1]

Great fic.
I love it.
*saves*