Comments | emptyfuneral: [fanfiction] usmnt slash

emptyfuneral

[fanfiction] usmnt slash

Apr 18, 2007 22:37

John Maine took a no-hitter into the seventh inning for the Mets tonight. So close, but still not there. It was good while it lasted. So everyone should have some fic to overcome their misery. (Not that I really think anyone else is affected by this.)

Quest
Football RPS, Benny Feilhaber/Michael Bradley, PG
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intl: usa, football/soccer, jimmy conrad, football/soccer fanfiction, jonathan bornstein, fanfiction

Comments 11

udontknoowme April 19 2007, 07:10:46 UTC

I'm very grateful you're writing USMNT slash. Glad to know I'm not the only one. Lol. So together, we must team up and show the world!

Plus, angsty Michael Bradley is so pretty. *pets*

"Being friends with me isn’t going to get you a spot on the team. I don’t have that kind of power over my dad.” Ouch! My heart. Seriously.

I'm loving this. Really. :)

emptyfuneral April 21 2007, 02:23:08 UTC

People do not know what they're missing. Not that anything will be happening until May 27th, but I will remain excited. (The friendly against China is two days after I finish school for three months and thus I have two wonderful things to look forward to right by each other.)

And Michael Bradley does not lose in the lovable department.

darklucia April 19 2007, 12:33:40 UTC

Yay fic! I liked it :) I'm glad I'm not the only one who slashes Benny in my head. I think you did decently well with the Sacha conversation. And the end was really cute :)

emptyfuneral April 21 2007, 02:25:14 UTC

Benny is taking up permanent residency in my head so he was bound to be slashed eventually. Thanks for reading.

maebybaby April 19 2007, 14:04:08 UTC

This is really great! I always thought to myself that Michael Bradley and Benny looked to comfortable on the field together to not be, um, close. :) And I think the way you portrayed Michael, with the issues about his dad and stuff, is perfect.

Plus you added some Sacha, Jonny Bornstein, and Jimmy to make me extra happy. Keep them coming.

emptyfuneral April 21 2007, 02:30:46 UTC

Michael Bradley and Benny are both adorable little boys who just seemed exactly like the type who would be friends. The whole thing started as Benny gen fic and then all of a sudden Michael was there. Just like Sacha, Jonathan, and Jimmy.

Taylor looks a little like Fabio Cannavaro in your icon. (And how about last night's Revs game!)

maebybaby April 21 2007, 15:00:20 UTC

Whew! That game was intense. I don't think they've even disciplined Herron yet.

Taylor looks a little like Fabio Cannavaro in your icon.
Huh. I never noticed that. :) He does a little, except prettier (IMO).

prinzrobokop11 April 19 2007, 20:08:48 UTC

Yay someone wrote a story about benny (I LOVE HIM)! keep writing about him or other usmnt Ill surely love to them!

emptyfuneral April 21 2007, 02:32:24 UTC

Benny is extremely lovable, isn't he? Thanks for reading.

wonderkid April 20 2007, 23:58:22 UTC

It’s not just any old trip to the USA now.

:)

what to say beyond that? the obvious, i guess: you picked a title and it fits very well! and, you know-- your benny wins the universe. i think this part has already been covered, though.

emptyfuneral April 21 2007, 00:04:09 UTC

hi! (where did that enthusiasm come from?) i was thinking of angsting but it would be, you know, elsewhere. i'm also hunched over at our desktop computer because my sister hijacked the laptop. and my mets are not having a good game. not to mention that my mother is kind of pissing me off. argh.