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emptyfuneral

[fanfiction] football rps

Feb 11, 2007 15:35

Lightning Doesn't Strike the Same Place Twice
Football RPS, Stevie/Xabi, PG-13
100 words

I do not own these boys.

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football/soccer fanfiction, public, stevie/xabi, fanfiction

Comments 16

eternitybreaks February 11 2007, 21:45:08 UTC

Aw! This is very beautiul (except the a/n at the end ruined it for me) but I liked it - and honestly I understand the meaning - it will never be like that again. Gorgeous.

emptyfuneral February 14 2007, 03:21:11 UTC

The A/N wasn't even supposed to be there. I put it in my copy on the computer for personal reference and I wasn't paying attention when I copy-pasted it. Sorry about that. But thanks for reading and the feedback.

analysezceci February 11 2007, 22:03:34 UTC

Aww, I love it.:) (And I hope everyday that it will be like that again, someday.)

emptyfuneral February 14 2007, 03:23:34 UTC

I hope it'll be like that again but that doesn't stop me from fearing that it won't.

pippopippo February 11 2007, 22:33:07 UTC

Short and sweet. This is really good. =]

emptyfuneral February 14 2007, 03:26:01 UTC

Thank you!

charientism February 12 2007, 01:10:45 UTC

*swallows tongue* oh, this is so lovely. that last line. so succinct & concentrated & it brings across that crazy crazy thing that is football (& faith).

emptyfuneral February 14 2007, 03:37:57 UTC

It really is a crazy crazy thing, isn't it?

Thanks for reading.

wonderkid February 12 2007, 02:01:04 UTC

now i get what you meant before, why you're so worried.-- gosh. what is there to say about all of it, really? (it hurts to read this and i still can't believe you can say so much with so little and i hope they can work something out, but none of that truly means what i intend.)

emptyfuneral February 14 2007, 03:40:58 UTC

and all i can say in response is my boys. (you know?)