Fix You (Chapter 2)

[emptycavern]

Title: Fix You (Chapter 2)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst
Word count: 2.8k
Chaptered: 01.

*Warning: Self-harm themed*

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Comments

[life_not_knife]

skldnfkdslfnkdslnfksdf! You updated!!! I love you!! haha.

Wow, this chapter had my emotions going through the ringer. To some extent I can really sympathise with Jinki's thought process, it kind of makes sense. I can also see why Key is the way he is too and why they are together... it doesn't exactly 'work' because Jinki is still broken but I kind of feel like despite all of that, they were meant for each other.

I'm not confused, I'm with you so far :) The way you add in the flashbacks is so natural and it follows the current thought process of the present day that it really works well. I think that the little check boxes you set out to achieve are being ticked here as far as a different writing style goes.

Anyway, i'm blabbing on and its almost 1am here so I better go to bed. Thanks for the update, I love this story and your writing is amazing.

Xx L xX

[emptycavern]

Wow your comment made my night :') I'm really glad that you like it so far and my ideas are coming across well, it gives me a bit more confidence. Thank you so much! :)

[stellabella1]

wow. i love the turmoil they're both going through. i really like how this story isn't one-sided. it's not just about onew but about their dynamic and relationship and how it affects key as well . love it!

[emptycavern]

Thank you! Yes I think it's hard to love a person who's broken, it kind of drains a bit of you away as well, but I want to believe there will be a person like Kibum who is always willing to try harder even so...

Thanks so much for your comment dear! :)