Post-Modern-Discourse fic

Apr 13, 2014 09:28

Some prompts people have given me, some that I've borrowed from other posts, and some that are new.

Basically everything I write for Livia is full of personal headspace and/or stuff about Pure Liao visions. So a warning for those appearing. :)

Fortitudinis fortitudo fortis, for rjw76

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cyrus, eleri, alan, livia, cora

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rubecso April 13 2014, 13:55:30 UTC
Fortitudinis fortitudo fortis: I love how this carries on from Cora's comment about how the Navarr used to be quite similar to Urizen. I really like that last line too.

Manipulation: I think this is a nice take on the Urizen relationship to emotion. It's not that it's bad; it just seems out of place and a little perilous when talking about things that matter.

Blue sprinkles: Made me smile, both at Eleri and Barak sharing the sudden death and at the last comment :)

Outside and Inside: Took me a moment to get used to the 2nd person perspective, but once I did it worked quite well for representing Livia's inner critic.

Guide: Fic like this is one of the things that makes me really happy that Modern Discourse happened. I especially liked Barak's talk, and I'm glad it had an impact on at least one person's play :).

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sin_and_sparkle April 13 2014, 14:28:57 UTC
More than one person's! :D

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rjw76 April 13 2014, 16:19:30 UTC
"And as I finish and check my transcription, she starts copying it as well, working through a rough translation out loud. I remember this for later - if anyone claims, anyone dares to suggest that Navarr is made up of ignorant barbarians, this is one of the scholars I would point them to"

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU :D :D

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nyeti April 13 2014, 20:50:05 UTC
Very nice to read, as ever, and I like the variety of styles. Especially the first, with the comments on the Navarr, and the last, with her thoughts on the Vision, made me smile :)

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