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Jun 10, 2007 19:07

The sirens faded, and Hotch fell against Gideon's soft shirtfront as everything went black.

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fanfiction, bsr, frm, criminal minds

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anonymous June 11 2007, 07:43:54 UTC
first of all: absolutely wonderful!

as far as the future arcs: i'd love to see them come asap! but that's just because i'm sorts of wrapped up and in love with the character development in this storyline. and i really can't want to see how they progress, especially hotch and reid, specifcally. with hotch so hesitant to begin with and the aftermath of read's ordeal. i'd love to see how all of this will affect their relationship and OKAY i could probably talk for hours about how i'd like you to continue this but it is obviously up to you and i'd probably read anything you write ... especially if it's another hotch/reid.

just sayin'. :)

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anonymous June 11 2007, 10:40:26 UTC
jycaegima i also thought they werent safe after the explosion (i thought hatford was watching as there relationship developed, and that as soon as hotch said he loved reid back hatford would come out from were he was hiding to finish off reid, he would either succeed or the rest of BAU would arrive to prevent it!) it was such a relief that they were, and such a sweet ending! i find myself wanting more, this was definately worth the wait, but is it the end? hatford did get away!!!! empathy_apathy how long have you been writing fan fic in general, because this is brilliant, it was fabulous, i think you got the characters spot on, and it was such an easy read (except for those constant cliffhangers)well you know what i mean by easy read, i mean comfortable, not overly drawn out with loads of needless filter, you dont have to answer this if you dont want, but at what age did you begin to write, i am in my teens, and want to write, but with exams and things i'm not sure if now is the right time, your fic has been distractin me from my GCSE ( ... )

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empathy_apathy June 11 2007, 17:00:32 UTC
Haha. I really did want Hatford to pop back in and just... shoot Reid, to be the bitch that he is. But I decided he can just hold his horses until arc 3.

I've been writing fanfiction since about the age of 13, but I've been doing general prose since I was about six. *laughs* I'm 18 now. Your teenage years are a great time to write, yeah. If you wanna write, you gotta write. No fighting that. <3

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empathy_apathy June 11 2007, 16:51:56 UTC
All right, another big yes!

The arcs are starting to fall into place as the story goes. The second arc, "Mending Spencer Reid", is mostly going to be aftermath, coping, what have you, with Hotch and Reid sharing the spotlight instead of this Hotch-centric first arc. The third (working title is "Testing Spencer Reid") will be mostly Reid, and is probably going to center on what happens when he and Hotch get back on the job.

As for more writing, Hotch/Reid is definitely my OTP, so there'll be lots of them in this journal from here on out, even after this series is done.

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soccerchick212 June 11 2007, 10:47:42 UTC
wow

that was GREAT!!! I loved it!!!

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thatsuddenneed June 11 2007, 13:12:36 UTC
The kiss spoke volumes!!!

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empathy_apathy June 11 2007, 16:43:13 UTC
As I hoped it would!!!

I rewrote/reworded/tweaked that line a good twenty times to see what best expressed it. Looks like it paid off!

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whispers_of_me June 11 2007, 14:22:34 UTC
gah, you always leave me hanging....more please!

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empathy_apathy June 11 2007, 17:02:25 UTC
Ahaha, I'm sorry. It's just what I do. *laughs* Suspense is so fun.

All right, more on the way!

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dian1988 June 11 2007, 14:42:32 UTC
Wounderful work - I like the development between Reid and Hotch. Keep up the good work . I am really looking forward to more . thanks and greetings

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empathy_apathy June 11 2007, 17:01:50 UTC
I'm rather enjoying the dynamics that keep forming between Hotch and other characters, Reid in particular.

Thanks for the comment, there's plenty more story on the way!

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