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holdmehoran May 11 2013, 03:56:05 UTC
I enjoyed this so much!! I love the Louis/Zayn dynamic, the idea of a rivalry that really only Louis follows, and the whole atmosphere of a debate competition!! I love the little tidbits you would add like the very last line about the trophy and basically the entire thing swell job I enjoy you very much

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miss_mady May 11 2013, 14:23:36 UTC
Thank you so much!! Speech and debate is really close to my heart so I tried to keep it as close as possible to what I knew of it and I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)

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mozarts_piano May 11 2013, 19:21:46 UTC
this was incredibly lovely! zayn and louis as bffs is always a sweet thing to read about, and they were really so so lovely here - zayn's little kisses :) and holding louis by the waist :) :) and hugging him when they win :) :) too cute

also harry was so sweet. and the fact that he kept making the moves, getting louis to like him, but ultimately louis made the first move move. louis kissed him first and i thought that was really cool because there is an age-gap and that was evident here. evident but not important, if that makes sense?

reading american hs aus is always interesting for me because although my academic school system is very similar (i'm in grade 11 in canada) the social aspect is completely different. we don't have debate teams and cheerleaders and this, this thing you wrote about here that is seems incredibly cool but i've never heard of it or really know what it is? anyways, i thought it was awesome because i learned something? and i love learning new things! to paraphrase something i heard in an episode of gilmore ( ... )

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miss_mady May 13 2013, 01:14:38 UTC
this was a really great comment, though!! speech and debate is something i did all four years of high school so it's really close to my heart and something i know more than most things so naturally, i've been wanting an AU for a while. it's hard to explain all the individual events but basically for the duo/humor/drama events, students choose a work and condense it into ten minutes and act it out. for duo, they're not allowed to look at each other or touch each other. you probably didn't want this explanation but it might be interesting idk!! anyways thank you for reading :)

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babygotbass May 12 2013, 00:20:40 UTC
super cute!! lou's internal denial dialog was fantastic :D

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miss_mady May 13 2013, 01:11:47 UTC
hehe thank you :)

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