ENL5F-06 - Yes I'm Awesome!

[emosnail]

"Rewrite the beginning of a myth, fable, or fairy tale through a new perspective. If you always write in first person, try second or third. If you always write in third person, try first or second, ect. You may alter the setting here as well, and make it contemporary, if you wish. (1-3 typed pages)   As I always write in the best way, Third Person

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[zszeldasz]

Oh my gosh, I can’t believe what just happened. So there I was, like, totally kicking their asses right? Gilgamesh and Enkidu I mean. Cause you know, my mouth is fire, my roar - the floodwater, I breath and there is death, all that jazz? Yeah, it was totally working.
Well then Gilgamesh, practically in tears, calls out to Shamash for help, and what does Shamash do? He sends thirteen storms against me! That’s right, the Wind of Simurru, the North Wind, South Wind, East and West, the Bone-Cold Wind, the great Storm Wind and even the Great Snow Wind, they were all there. How the hell was I supposed to deal with that?? <---my favorite part bwahaha. oh and the bunny.

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[emosnail]

I think my personal favorite line is "yeah it was totally working" (coupled of course with the line preceding that). Good times.