Fic -- In The End 4/5

[emoryems]

Title: In The End

Author: Emoryems

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: pre-Blaine/Kurt

Spoilers: Pretty much everything up to 2.14 is fair game.

Warnings: talk of non-con, violence, language.

Word Count: 3,411

Summary: continuation of Your Sins Into Me (warning for explicit non-con).

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Comments

[mad_half_hour]

This continues to be lovely. =)

I actually felt the fight scene was done rather well-- the wording really emphasized the panic and quickness of the assault in Kurt's mind, and highlighted his reactions to it. It felt appropriately disconnected with the fear and the anger and deseperation to just get away.

[emoryems]

<3

I was worried about that scene working -- it's wonderful to hear that it came across in that manner. Thank you! :D

[alter_alterego]

What I think? I think I am thrilled that you "lied" about this only being four parts. You've given so much depth to the inner turmoil of the characters -- particularly Kurt, and his self-blaming tendencies-- and I'm willing to stay around as long as you need to see how they cope with it.

[emoryems]

Fleshing out this whole scenario has been one heck of a ride emotionally, and giving the story depth (especially when dealing with something so difficult) has been most definitely worthwhile. Thank you :)

[h_lunulata]

SO excited for the next part. This story is wonderful.

[emoryems]

Thank you! I'm working on it ;)

[raokhshna]

What are you talking about? That fight scene was great!

Another chapter? Yessss! I'll be anxiously waiting for it.

Thanks for sharing!

[violets92]

Ahhh this is so good! I have no words. Only a request that you update soon!

[emoryems]

Just trying to fit everything I want to be said into the last part :) should be done fairly soon! Thank you <3