Make The World Go Away

Dec 29, 2010 11:12

Author: emocezi
Title: Make The World Go Away.
Rating: R
Wordcount: 4034
Disclaimer: I do not own The Losers nor do I make a profit from this work of fiction.
A/N: Finally escaped various relatives and managed to finish this chapter. It's getting interesting. I hope everyone had an excellent Christmas.
Previous Chapters: Basic Instincts, Fur Pile, Read more... )

pooch, r, roque, cougar, fandom: the losers, clay, jensen

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lassroyale December 29 2010, 19:00:36 UTC
OMG I LOVE THIS VERSE SO MUCH! Here's rooting for eventual Jensen/Roque in this version of the series. I love their dynamic - I mean, hell, they are perfect for eachother (as you portray them here). LOL. I totally want Roque to HAVE to mark Jensen and then sit back and watch as they both have to deal with it.

Unf, just perfect. I think you are handling this with much aplomb, m'dear and I always look forward to reading more. :)

Also? 'Chuff' has got to be one of my new favorite words. Hee. I just got this iPad drawing program, perhaps I'll try to draw a little Jensen/Roque as animals or something.

I am inspired ver' much.

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emocezi December 29 2010, 23:17:56 UTC
:D :D :D :D :D :D

You know, I started this with the intention of making it Jensen/Cougar. And then Roque turned into an all right sort of guy, and now I don't even know what's going on anymore. Lol.

I'm glad you're likeing all the new developments though. This is a very fun verse to dabble around in. Lots of fun things to do.

Huzzah for the aplomb. And yes, chuff is such an interesting word.

Glad you liked, thanks for the comment.

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whogeek December 29 2010, 19:10:38 UTC
Oh man. Definitely getting more interesting. A lot more violent than the original verse, and probably a lot more realistic.... relatively speaking. Poor Jensen. Cougar... not so much. He's being stupid. And Roque is being... scarily nice, in a weird, twisted, fucked-up-in-the-head way.

**purrs and rubs against Jensen in support**

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emocezi December 29 2010, 23:25:05 UTC
Yeah, it is a lot more violent, but indeed, more realistic as well. I think I was glossing over a lot of the violence in the last series, making it more fluffy and porny.

I'm liking writing this one far more then the last verse I did, if only because I can play with everyone's reactions more and make them more then just 2-Dimensional characters.

Glad you like, thanks for the comment.

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setos_puppy December 29 2010, 19:52:54 UTC
JSKDFLLA;FHA;FHVJKHDVDJKASFDSFWERUAGF

THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS

I love how Roque is so calmly powerful in his "what the fuck are you going to do about it" way. I love that he doesn't push Jensen and that he's completely at ease with Jensen being his awesome, powerful unmarked self.

Cougar on the other hand... *smacks him down with the hand of god.* Idiot.

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emocezi December 29 2010, 23:26:50 UTC
HAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Awwwwww, did I hit your powerplay kink button? :p

And yes, Cougar is a typical Alpha that doesn't care if a beta wants his attentions or not. I hope he gets his act together soon, or it's going to end up the Jensen/Roque show. Not that anyone would mind. P:

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setos_puppy December 29 2010, 23:49:07 UTC
I totally and completely would not mind if it became the Jensen and Roque show. Especially if there was a nice, long smutty interlude. And maybe a soft, smutty interlude if Jensen was feeling up to it when not in heat. Though I don't see that happening any time in the immediate future.

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emocezi December 30 2010, 02:44:15 UTC
LOL. Gee Mina, tell me how you really feel.

And yeah, I don't see the soft smutty interlude happening outside of Jensen's heat anytime at all. Because even though Jensen said yes, he just wouldn't enjoy it.

Somehow, I think you'll understand. *snickers*

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northernwalker December 29 2010, 21:46:50 UTC
I like your Roque- he's an Alpha, but he's not a jerk about it. Cougar is reminding me of Lora Leigh's Breed series, which I hate with the fire of a thousand burning nuns- stalkery possessive jerks who treat women like children? So not sexy.

I'm curious what will happen if Roque has to mark Jensen- I would like to see things settle out well, but seriously doubt they will as the situation currently stands.

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emocezi December 29 2010, 23:27:58 UTC
I like my Roque too. *draws hearts on him*

Yeah, Cougar has to get his act together soon. Because I'm not liking him so much right now, and this might end up turning into Jensen/Roque, and less Roque/Jensen?Cougar like I had planned.

*kicks Cougar*

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kyuubi_paw December 30 2010, 01:03:16 UTC
*noms all over ficcage*
Soo, yes. i am glad, and yet unnerved, waiting to see what happens. and i always keep wanting to come back and paw all over Jensen, which of course, wouldn't be for the best interest of my continuing health.. >_>

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emocezi December 30 2010, 02:46:31 UTC
No, it really wouldn't. Because Cougar would be giving you the stink eye, Roque would be lurking, and Jensen would rip your arms off and smack you with them. He's easy going, but he don't like all the touchy-touchy. Lol

Glad you liked this one. It was fun to write.

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