Comments | emo_snl: Crunch

emo_snl

Crunch

Feb 01, 2011 17:47

I had been walking among banana trees, the dried leaves crunching beneath my feet. Suddenly I'm jolted to awake by something landing on my chest. I immediately open my eyes wide to see a small mammalian predator that has just jumped up onto my chest. Or rather onto the banket, for I appear to be wrapped in a blanket on a couch. I hold ( Read more... )

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basric February 2 2011, 04:53:29 UTC

I liked it. Its well written and I've already voted for you.

emo_snl February 9 2011, 05:46:07 UTC

Thanks (:

ecosopher February 2 2011, 06:26:11 UTC

I loved the last bit - I never thought that it would be as shocking to discover you WEREN'T a clone as much as it would to find out you were. Well done.

emo_snl February 9 2011, 05:46:28 UTC

Thanks! (:

myrna_bird February 2 2011, 15:39:15 UTC

And the search continues...
Good!

emo_snl February 9 2011, 05:46:41 UTC

Indeed it does! (:

similiesslip February 2 2011, 16:12:47 UTC

OK, this was very well-written because silly me was thinking the first part was true.

Banana trees ARE all clones? I didn't know that.

And I definitely agree with "No one really knows why we are here." I wonder that often but I guess I should just...it IS the eternal mystery.

emo_snl February 9 2011, 05:47:31 UTC

Yep, banana trees are all clones, they no longer even have the ability to reproduce on their own. At least hte familiar yellow bananas.