The Gaps in the Map

Mar 15, 2020 01:26

   "But where's the chart of the area just east of here??" asked first mate John Blood gruffly, bracing himself against the chart table as the little brigantine the Streisand rolled in the large swells. The shadows of his face danced as the hanging lantern swung from its chain. The red tinted glass of the light cast everything in a surreal crimson ( Read more... )

lj idol entry, sailing, pirates, fiction

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rayaso March 18 2020, 21:55:57 UTC
That was a great pirates' tale, full of salty talk and a well-deserved twist at the end. Great use of the topic!

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banana_galaxy March 19 2020, 03:29:19 UTC
Yes! I was hoping the captain had tricked him.

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alycewilson March 19 2020, 23:48:31 UTC
Clever! Loved every bit of it.

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karmasoup March 21 2020, 00:29:52 UTC
Well, at least it was a bloodless coup, though too bad for those stuck on the wrong side. Nice job with this!

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