Busman's Holiday

[emo_snal]

   Danny couldn't help but notice the man seemingly casing the small seaside house. The beach was almost entire deserted as Danny slowly walked along, enjoying the the feeling of his feet sinking into the wet sand. Ahead was one man, looking not at the seat but at the house among the palms ashore. The man was wearing a white linen shirt and a

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[alycewilson]

Wow! I did not see that coming. Great story telling!

[emo_snal]

Thanks! (:

[roina_arwen]

Nice twist there!

[emo_snal]

Thanks! (:

[tonithegreat]

I am totally imagining Dean Norris (the brother-in-law DEA cop from Breaking Bad) as the police beach walker. This was very well done.

[emo_snal]

Haha possibly!

[halfshellvenus]

You definitely had me worried again and again, all the way to the end!

[emo_snal]

haha excellent, thanks! (: