And now... remember that cliffhanger I left you all on? Well... this post will have cliffs at least! Tomorrow should wrap up this wedding trip and then the next day we'll get to the other side of that cliffhanger! ;D
George had been hoping to see her. He'd been impatient to see her. He could have taken a later bus, or an earlier bus, but THIS was the bus he knew she took. It would have been maybe more like him to come running up to the bus with thirty seconds to spare, but instead he impatiently waited until the earliest he could reasonably walk down there, arriving half an hour before the bus was due
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I was afraid to reread it until just now. Oops her name changes between Sharon and Sarah from one paragraph to the next! And there's that zero hanging in there that probably went with the submitted version. I wonder how forgiving of stupid mistakes like that they'll be :-[]
That's a climb and a half! Love the views, even the slightly dizzying ones. :) Good little story and that you threw it together so quickly is pretty amazing!
As to the story, I was afraid to reread it until just now. Oops her name changes between Sharon and Sarah from one paragraph to the next! And there's that zero hanging in there that probably went with the submitted version. I wonder how forgiving of stupid mistakes like that they'll be :-[]
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George had been hoping to see her. He'd been impatient to see her. He could have taken a later bus, or an earlier bus, but THIS was the bus he knew she took. It would have been maybe more like him to come running up to the bus with thirty seconds to spare, but instead he impatiently waited until the earliest he could reasonably walk down there, arriving half an hour before the bus was due ( ... )
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Great plot line... when first we practice to deceive....
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Good little story and that you threw it together so quickly is pretty amazing!
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As to the story, I was afraid to reread it until just now. Oops her name changes between Sharon and Sarah from one paragraph to the next! And there's that zero hanging in there that probably went with the submitted version. I wonder how forgiving of stupid mistakes like that they'll be :-[]
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