Dirty Laundry (2/?)

May 11, 2014 19:55

Title:  Dirty Laundry (2/?)
Characters: James Kirk, OC
Disclaimer: Characters and canon belong to Paramount, Roddenberry, Abrams and many others, but not me. All rights reserved. No copyright infringement intended. No profit is made by the author.

Chapter Two )

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greek_jester May 14 2014, 22:26:01 UTC
Wow. The hairs lifted on the back of my neck *shivers*

I really didn't like the way they played it in the film; it made Kirk come across as someone who couldn't stand his pride being damaged by an unwinnable test. It's always made me a bit uneasy with Kirk, particularly after the first half of the last film.

This is the way it should have been played; letting us see the potential as well as the brat.

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