Contralateral chapter three

Sep 14, 2010 18:27

Aaaaand moving on...

Chapter Three )

fanfiction, writing, supernatural, contralateral

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dark_austral September 21 2010, 03:08:00 UTC
Why hello there Castiel and Chuck, a pleasant suprise. I liked how you focused into Dean's reasoning and how it's great that it's Sam but still demon's lie. But I liked too how there's this mystery as to Sam's return and Rob's last words. Also, Ruby had a Vergere's tone to her, which was great. I liked too that you added the whole 'it's all about you'.

Hope you continue onwards :)

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emmram September 24 2010, 16:50:35 UTC
Thank you! :D

Ruby was interesting to write, especially considering her rather inconsistent characterisation in the show (I see what they were going for; I don't know if it was the casting or the acting or the writing or, more likely, a combination of the three, that made it kind of unconvincing). I'm loving putting a bit of Vergere in her! It's so exciting to write the Sam-In-Hell part that I'm almost sorry to end the section in each chapter. :p

Glad to know you're enjoying this so far! :)

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