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sn_crossovers Title: Hazardous Duty
Pairing/Characters: Mack/Dean, Tiffy, Jonas, Tom
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: Season 1 (Supernatural), Season 1 (The Unit)
Summary: Mack can't stop thinking about new Unit soldier Dean Winchester
Notes/Warnings: Read the
disclaimer on my LJ
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Only problem was it stalled after I started it back in late 2006. I got it done a few days back and really just wanted it over and published, so forgive it not being my best. Bad me, hoping to ride on the coattails of an inherently hot pairing. ;-)
I confess I've forgotten what inspired the title, but I think there was supposed to be something in the fic about it. Ahh, well. Perhaps next time I'll take better notes. But then again, I don't plan on having any partial fic sit around for three years anymore. /grins/
I admit to being lazy on the spoilers, but it's been so long since I watched Season 1 of each show that I can't recall exactly which episodes are spoiled. Clearly not much, but I try to err on the side of caution.
Thanks,
Emma DeMarais
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"Oh, you wouldn't hate running into me in a dark alley. I'm told I'm lots of fun in them."
*laughs* Dean, you SLUT!
I liked Mack so freaked out by his own fantasies, threatening to kick Dean's ass if he smoked on Alpha team. And that supply room scene - hot.
The no longer familiar saltiness exploded on his tongue - a bitter aphrodisiac for an illicit liaison.
Mmmmmm.
Both of them sounded more poetic than I expected, but not in any way that interfered with my enjoyment. And I really enjoyed those glimpses of Jonas, who was absolutely Not Asking.
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Thank you so much for reading this and for a fabulous comment!
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I'm so relieved to hear you think I did a decent job on the military angle. I was really worried about it, especially because I couldn't find any resources to tell me what name they used for that break room they hang out in.
Just out of curiosity, are you bribable? I've got a long Mack gen fic that takes place in the field so I'm really worried about logistics (ha!) and terminology. If you'd be willing to read through and help me with some questions that are holding up the ending, I'd be willing to trade you a short fic, written to your prompt, for this or any other pairing/fandom I write.
LMK if you're interested. You can reach me with a comment or via email. My email is my LJ username at gmail dot com.
Thanks so much for taking the time to give this a read and thank you for your very encouraging comment!
P.S. A big YES to what you said in your first paragraph. They may not be an obvious pairing, but once you are presented with them, the appeal is certainly obvious!
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I'm normally very anti-smoking (and I do wish Jensen would quit) but in some fictional instances it can be very hot. Then again, Dean's mouth wrapped around *anything* is pretty damn sinful. Hehehe
Thanks for reading this, hon!
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