Haha, another great chapter. The petting zoo scene was an avalanche of cute and giggles. You write a very good Toph, too, and the part about her throwing pebbles at Ozai... awesome.
There's also the more serious undercurrent of Aang's inner turmoil. I wonder what kind of answer Mai gave him? I like her dryly witty dialogue, which reminds me a bit of Loopy777's Mai's Ramblings.
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There's also the more serious undercurrent of Aang's inner turmoil. I wonder what kind of answer Mai gave him? I like her dryly witty dialogue, which reminds me a bit of Loopy777's Mai's Ramblings.
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