let's keep the sounds from running out
frank/gerard
1,497 words
do not own
beta'd by
whisperingtome, everything i could ask for in a friend!
lots of you have already read it, so don't even worry about it.
written for the
nightmare_xmas challenge, for
greenjelloforst and the
100_situations prompt 079: winter.
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let's keep the sounds from running out )
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I love the way this was built, makes it so much painful at the end.
You made this seem so real.
The way they talk about it without bringing it up, the book still faced down, the way they spent a year pretending everything was okay, the vague description of the accident, this littles things make it seem so real.
I have this knot in my throat, just thinking this could possible be real.
The last line was like a punch in the stomach...it hurt!
Oh God, I just realised who miserable this comment looks, I'm sorry about that.
You're an amazing writer and this was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.
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Feeling like a cry-baby but hell.. sweet work! <3
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