Fic: Let's Keep The Sounds From Running Out

Jan 14, 2008 21:26

let's keep the sounds from running out
frank/gerard
1,497 words

do not own
beta'd by whisperingtome, everything i could ask for in a friend!
lots of you have already read it, so don't even worry about it.

written for the nightmare_xmas challenge, for greenjelloforst and the 100_situations prompt 079: winter.

let's keep the sounds from running out )

my chemical romance fiction

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sararg January 15 2008, 01:16:26 UTC
Jesus, I'm crying so hard right now.
I love the way this was built, makes it so much painful at the end.

You made this seem so real.
The way they talk about it without bringing it up, the book still faced down, the way they spent a year pretending everything was okay, the vague description of the accident, this littles things make it seem so real.
I have this knot in my throat, just thinking this could possible be real.

The last line was like a punch in the stomach...it hurt!

Oh God, I just realised who miserable this comment looks, I'm sorry about that.
You're an amazing writer and this was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.

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mcrdrugist January 15 2008, 01:34:45 UTC
Wow. Althought it was really really sad it was also extremely powerful. I liked how you gave just enough information for us to understand everything.

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spilledxperfume January 15 2008, 04:47:25 UTC
The only problem I had was the instant coffee. But other than that, OMFG. That was amazing!

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falseprotection January 15 2008, 18:10:06 UTC
Like aaw :(
Feeling like a cry-baby but hell.. sweet work! <3

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spy_a_rainbow January 15 2008, 19:36:11 UTC
oh wow, this is exquisite. beautiful and broken and tearing away at my skin like a paper cut and i love love love it. great work!

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