Comments | emiliglia: An End Has a Start (Dean/Carmen, Sam/Jess R) 3/10

emiliglia

An End Has a Start (Dean/Carmen, Sam/Jess R) 3/10

Dec 13, 2007 06:36

Title: An End Has a Start - Part 3
Rating: R
Pairings: Dean/Carmen, Sam/Jess
Word Count: 5,086 (50,221 overall)
Warnings: Wishverse fic, spoilers for S1 & S2 through 2x20
Summary: After Dean wakes up in the hospital with amnesia after an apparent attempted suicide, the answers he seeks just brings more questions before turning his world completely ( Read more... )

fanfic, nanowrimo, supernatural

Comments 20

savvypeaches December 14 2007, 05:12:15 UTC

I'm really enjoying this story. I love amnesia fics, and your tie-ins with the regular storyline within the djinn-verse is very fun!

emiliglia December 18 2007, 00:26:36 UTC

Thanks for reading/commenting! I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint! :)

willfully December 14 2007, 07:35:36 UTC

I really liked the retelling of the story from Sam's perspective, and the end.

“For what it’s worth,” Sam began, “I don’t think you’re insane. Crazy, maybe, but not insane.”

“God you are so drunk,” was what Dean said instead of what he knew he was supposed to say.

It's just so. I don't know, them? Yeah. It's them. :D

emiliglia December 18 2007, 00:32:34 UTC

It's just so. I don't know, them? Yeah. It's them. :D

I wanted to keep their personalities essentially the same, so I'm glad that came across. :) Thanks for reading!

julorean December 16 2007, 01:51:19 UTC

OMG. I love how this Dean has some of the qualities of our Dean...he recognizes that the guy had a gun when no other civilian would, and takes him down expertly, all on instinct, to protect Sam. kickass. I love it. lol, Batman. Hee!

And the bar...heh. It's so familiar to us, we know that it;s precisely the type our Dean hangs out, precisely because they won't get bothered.

emiliglia December 18 2007, 00:34:52 UTC

I'm glad you're still liking it - I have this irrational fear that I'll do something in the story and everyone will stop reading. :P Thank you!

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 19:48:12 UTC

I really like the way you're slowly and realistically giving him hints of his former life. “Are you feeling all right? You look like you’ve just seen a ghost.” That idea didn’t feel wrong at all. And the incident with the bank robber. Nice. You're pacing this well, I think.

And this is really nice writing: But the problem was that he didn’t have any voices. He had the opposite of voices. No one was trying to tell him what to do; he was trying to tell himself what he had done.

Off to part 4. :)

emiliglia December 18 2007, 00:37:56 UTC

Thanks, babe! I had some random moments of inspiration writing this, where words just came out and I thought they were perfect. That was one of them. I was worried the bank robber scene would be too cheesy, like of course they had to be at the bank when it was getting robbed, but suspension of disbelief, you know. :P Glad you're still on board!

alemyrddin December 19 2007, 15:23:39 UTC

lovely! I loved action!Dean (Jasoun Bourne, lol) and the brothers starting to bond.

Sam had professors at school that still didn’t know how to do a PowerPoint presentation and still insisted on using an overhead projector during lecture.
*groans*
I've suffered through that kind of lessons (more than once, actually).

emiliglia December 22 2007, 15:48:47 UTC

I thought of Jason Bourne too as I was writing this. :P

My math classes were all overhead projectors... I kinda didn't mind professors using those because I had an anthropology professor who would handwrite the notes so she wouldn't write down a ton of stuff because her hand would hurt like ours would. :P

Thanks for reading!