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emiliglia

For Queen gottalovev: First Times

Aug 01, 2007 12:10

Queen Lou ask for first times, and this is what my muses went with.

Sorry it's like...way angsty, but I think it ends on a good note.

A ficlet for the queen!

Title: Two Firsts and a Last
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Boone, Jack/Sawyer
Word Count: 428
Warnings: Character death, second person narrative
Summary: For lostsquee's luau.

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( The first time Boone kisses you was also the last. )

fanfic, lost

Comments 29

inthekeyofd August 1 2007, 17:32:10 UTC

Freakin' damn, did you all get some memo that this was going to be the prompt today, because these aren't only coming fast and furious, they are freakin' fantastic too!!!

I really miss Boone, I never thought I'd say that, but I have been lately, and Sawyer, oh that would have been the PERFECT time to kiss him.

*sigh* so much goodness in so few words.

emiliglia August 2 2007, 20:55:19 UTC

LOL no memo - I think this one surprised even me. :P Glad you liked it, hun!

elise_509 August 1 2007, 18:08:16 UTC

your last two lines broke my soul in an impossibly beautiful way. such a great story!!! *loves you*

emiliglia August 2 2007, 20:51:02 UTC

Thanks so much, hun! *loves back*

gottalovev August 1 2007, 18:33:12 UTC

oh! WOW!

that is so beautiful and angsty, it breaks my heart and then makes it better...

wonderfully written too, so many emotions...

but no matter how hard he squeezes it's never hard enough to transfer his agony to you. OW! so JACK.

then

His lips feel so hot against your own and kiss you so earnestly, so demandingly, that you feel like he's trying to give you some of his fever, like he's trying to take some of the coolness from your skin.

hot in every way possible!

and the ending, the ending.... *holds close*

I ADORE this. thank you so much!

emiliglia August 2 2007, 20:56:08 UTC

I didn't want to write something completely depressing for you as I'd originally intended, so I added Sawyer, and I think it turned out better with him there!

So glad you liked it, babe!

toestastegood August 1 2007, 23:35:55 UTC

Ouch, the Jack/Boone is like a stab to the chest. A really well-written stab to the chest, though, and the last line is hopeful enough to help me recover. ;)

emiliglia August 2 2007, 20:56:48 UTC

Yeah I didn't want to like overly depress people with this. :P I'm glad you liked it!

uhzoomzip August 2 2007, 02:52:23 UTC

wow, this was fantastic! love the contrast between the two kisses. and how sad that jack can only gets lucky with semi-conscious guys?

excellent job, hon!

emiliglia August 2 2007, 20:52:50 UTC

Well I left off implying that there would be more getting lucky from Sawyer later on. ;) Originally this was going to be Jack/Boone with the first time they kiss and then what I wrote being the last, but I didn't want to write something so depressing for a present, so I wrote in the part with Sawyer. :) Thanks for reading!