Fic: "What's Mine (Isn't Yours)" -- Part One. Kurt/Blaine, unrequited Kurt/Karofsky.

Sep 17, 2011 17:42

Woohoo!! I managed to get this one all finished up before the end of the hiatus!! *party party party* After this point, my Uni tends to pick up a lot, as well, so I'm pleased to have one last fandom hurrah before I get buried in textbooks.

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Title: What's Mine (Isn't Yours)
Author: emilianadarling
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Kurt/Blaine, unrequited Kurt/Karofsky
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nielrian September 20 2011, 01:17:47 UTC
GUH I've wanted this situation FOREVER, you have no idea. And when I saw you had written it I almost sprained my wrist trying to click the link. You, being you, handled the situation perfectly, with juuuust the right edge of darkness and hnnnnng I love it.

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emilianadarling September 20 2011, 01:49:30 UTC
(Bb, hi! It's so nice to see you round these parts~! <3)

And oh, no, I TOTALLY understand! I've wanted this situation forever and for all time as well, and I couldn't figure out why no one had written it yet! (This was definitely one of those "WELL, FINE. I WILL DO IT MYSELF" pouty-child moments, lol. XD) I'm so happy that you were happy to see I'd written it!!

And mmm, I'm so happy you're enjoying the little bit of darkness so far. <3 No idea if you've just read the first half or not, I'm so happy you've enjoyed it so far! I hope you enjoy the second half!

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nielrian September 20 2011, 02:12:21 UTC
Oh, no. I read all of it. I think it was just the right amount of darkness. Sometimes it gets taken too far, to the point where it's no longer believable, I think. And you toed that line extremely well. It was a bit gritty and a bit dark, and 100% perfect.

(It's nice to see you 'round every part, lady ;) *creeper* )

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emilianadarling September 20 2011, 02:33:04 UTC
You can creep me any time, hon! ;D

(Aha, I sometimes have people comment on parts of things that aren't the last part, and when I go, "...there is another part, you know," they go WHAT OMG *readreadread*, so I always like to make sure. ^-^ *loser*)

Totally know what you mean about toeing lines and not going over the top, as well. It always drives me nuts when a wonderful, complex idea gets taken too far into the realm of 'oh, damn, I can't really believe that anymore'. I definitely wanted to stay firmly within the realm of Blaine's own character and age. <3

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loonylevicorpus September 23 2011, 01:25:10 UTC
I thought that I should come back and review this fic before continuing Howl (Just about to start part 3!) because it is utterly fabulous and I want to give you all of the feedback that you deserve. So here we go!


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loonylevicorpus September 23 2011, 01:25:28 UTC
"Kurt doesn’t even register to them as a sexual object, most of the time..."
WELL OBVIOUSLY NONE OF THEM ARE A PART OF THIS FANDOM

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emilianadarling September 26 2011, 06:30:40 UTC
AHA, I KNOW RIGHT? XD I think it's like how television programs have, like, "Hollywood Homely" characters who are supposed to be unattractive but their actors are gorgeous. Because Chris Colfer? IS SEXY AS FUCK, but apparently like no one ever realizes that Kurt is. OH TELEVISION.

And your entire paragraph about Kurt, Blaine, and intimacy just had me nodding my head like a crazy person, because yes. Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES. Intimacy for them is SO much more special and meaningful because they're both such tightly-wound people -- Kurt especially, who allows so few people to see what's under that tough outer shell. It makes everything so much more special and close and everything for them. (And at that particular moment, drives Blaine that little bit more crazy about the entire situation.) I love how you highlight how innocent that makes their interaction in some way, because I completely agree with you. It's the perfect word, and thank you so much for saying I convey that well. <3

AND LOLOLOLOLOL BOYS, AMIRITE? XD

They're both being ( ... )

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emilianadarling September 26 2011, 06:16:28 UTC
OKAY LET'S DO THIS. *cracks knuckles* I'm so happy to see these gorgeous, lovely, AMAZING responses as you know!!! <3 Thank you so much for taking the time to leave these, they're SO brilliant!

And actually, thank you so much for mentioning that first scene! I really debated whether or not it was necessary for such a short story, but I wanted to build up Blaine's anxiety -- and yet, certainty -- at his decision. So thank you so much for highlighting it! (And also, oh my gosh, high school = totally smells like Axe Body Spray. Or at least the one I went to did. XD)

And OH MY GOSH. I changed your opinion of Dave? *speechless* I cannot... I cannot even, oh my goodness. That makes me so happy I can't even tell you!!! Honestly, I love Dave to pieces. Unrequited Kurtofsky is definitely my second-biggest OTP in Glee fandom just because he fucks up so much and it could never, ever work but he just wants it to so badly. Seriously, I cannot even convey how happy I am that I was able to sway you on him a little, because that boy is angsty story ( ... )

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emilianadarling September 26 2011, 05:59:38 UTC
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! :D I'm delighted that you enjoyed it!! And I think Blaine is VERY sympathetic to the idea of punching Karofsky at that point, for sure. *nodnod*

And oh, your cockblocking coworkers. XD

Thank you~!

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kironomi December 20 2011, 14:12:58 UTC
omg, this is so exciting to read.Blaine experiencing all these raw emotions-love, jealousy and anger.

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theromanticnerd March 2 2012, 13:18:14 UTC
This is one of those times for me when you know you like something, but you have no idea how much you do.

I have always known that possessiveness and jealousy are hot on some level... But what you are doing with this, the way you handle Dave and Kurt and Blaine and their relationships with each other... I am out of my mind with wanting to read this forever.

It is insane how much I love this.

It's brilliant

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