Comments | emerish: fic; Sherlock/John; Chasing Butterflies

emerish

fic; Sherlock/John; Chasing Butterflies

Jan 03, 2011 18:44

Title: Chasing Butterflies
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,138
Warnings: implied drug use, guns, kidnapping (but nothing explicit or dark)
Summary: Angry with himself and John, Sherlock left on a case. Alone. And things went badly wrong.
A/N: Thank you to my wonderful beta devikun. This fic was written for patster223 as a part of holmestice challenge.

( It was not supposed to be like this. )

length: one-shot, p: sherlock/john, !fan fiction

Comments 13

jenanime4eva January 3 2011, 17:43:37 UTC

Suddenly, Lestrade rushed into the room, took one look at them intertwined, muttered, startled, “Uh, um, I’ll just-” and ran back out just as quickly.

BWAHAHAHA. THIS IS MADE OF SO MUCH WIN XD.

emerish January 3 2011, 17:55:52 UTC

Thank you! xD

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emerish January 3 2011, 17:56:22 UTC

Thank you! =)

mushroom18 January 4 2011, 14:36:16 UTC

Yay. :3 Adorably fluffy. The reactions were the best XD

emerish January 4 2011, 19:03:52 UTC

Thank you! =D

myszata January 5 2011, 23:32:26 UTC

Sorry for late commenting but I had very busy week (it's long weekend now, yay!), so I can confess it to you...
CAN I MARRY YOUR BRAIN, PLEASE?
I lo0ve your style, I love the brackets, italics, changing of perspective.
Your style is perfectly suited for me XD
Even if it as happy ending and etc., it's fluffy and good, so go very, very good, it has depth as well, is slighty angsty and I am really impressed.
And I am envious of the fact, that'll never make it to your level, especially in English!
So... it was impressive, thank you!

emerish January 6 2011, 21:58:28 UTC

MY BRAIN WILL BE HONORED. *g*

No, really. Not every day I find someone who says my style is suited to them, which by the way makes me ridiculously happy to write more. :D

aww. *blushes* I'm so glad that you like it. I tried so hard; thank you for the comment. *hugs*

zephyrrdragon January 8 2011, 21:02:32 UTC

My brain right now: LOVELOVELOVE*SQUEEE*LOVELOVELOVE!!

This is AMAZING! I love that you linked it back round using the same flashback?/dream? at the end as you used at the beginning! And you did a really good job of rebuilding their relationship - it didn't jump at all!

*sighs at the awesomeness* <3

emerish January 8 2011, 21:14:04 UTC

Aww. *blushes*

Thank you. I'm so happy that you like it. Also, I'm glad that my dream scenes (the italics in the brackets) worked out so well. <3